Crispy_Robin's manga / #Blunt(4)

It was very good....loved how the seme was sooo serious (that it was funny..... especially after they got together seme's bluntness was funny af)....loved how the seme influenced the uke and helped him get good marks when the uke was always ditching classes and failing classes...really wanted to see how seme's parents would react when they would know about the uke and seme going out(seme's brother was kinda frivolous so they raised uke as a really serious person)

It was very good....loved it.....cute and heartwarming.....the art was really beautiful.....loved how the uke was all about being able to hide his emotions well(always using fake smile) and the seme was really blunt(he couldn't control himself and say whatever he have in mind without being able to control himself)....it just make them sound opposite.....would have actually liked it more if the seme became friends with uke's friend.....specially mob character A(in the extra one of the side characters broke the fourth wall and called himself mob character A....and the extra was from that friend's POV)...would have been nice seeing seme having friends and the misunderstanding to be cleared(the seme have an infamous reputation....his nickname is mad dog and he have a lots of rumour regarding violence....he also looks scary and have a scar which was actually given by his dog and the rumour goes as if that the seme got it from yakuza.....but those are not true..... because the seme looks scary others just picks fight with him).....wanted really bad to see the uke coming clean about himself and the seme to his friends.....it would have been great....I really liked seme and his dog's relationship....loved how seme saved the dog and as the dog was insecure he gave seme a scar while the seme was trying to care for him.....it was heart touching.....also the fact that the dog always bark and bite the seme everytime they meet is hilarious....wanted to see more of their moments and bonding....they are really cute

It was fine.... Didn't like how the seme pushed around uke a lot.....like glad that he didn't rape him....but still it was sexual assault....I honestly don't understand how someone can like someone after being sexually assaulted.....and well really hated the uke for being wishy washy....like literally he is like no don't do this, don't do that....but then get angry when the seme don't do that.....also it felt confusing when literally it was shown them having sex, in the next panel seme having a slap mark(the uke slapped him) and then after that the uke was like why is seme not going all the way???(and it also looked like uke was wondering if the seme is gonna thrust and if uke can take it .....which is weird like it felt like they didn't do it yet but at the same time if was shown they did it)

It was very good... Loved how dedicated the uke was lollll(he wanted to write an action manga but then the seme approached him with an offer to write bl manga....when he started writing the uke was rejected over and over by the seme....and then uke was like he doesn't have any experience or anything for him to write it.....and then they had sex for the uke to have experience).....also loved how the uke was afraid of height but was trying too hard to hide it....seme looking more like Yakuza than uke was funny(the uke was ex-yakuza but seme looked scary loll).....it was cute....the story's progression was good too....the moment the seme stood up for uke was good(there was another editor who was seme's senior in his ex-company wanted to recruit uke....it was a bigger company and also action related.....seemed like the seme was actually kinda afraid of him.....in the meeting the guy started ditching seme and the moment he ditched uke's work the seme poured liquid on him and was like u can say anything about me but u can't tell any bad thing about uke's work)