Sweet Life
Body Complex
This story honestly lost me at times. I felt like the overall plot could have been better and fleshed out. I think skipping into Jaehyun and Seojin relationship was too fast, I think it would grounded me more had I saw how much Jaehyun relied on minwoo more. It would have made me understand the drive for him to try and be free of that controlling bastard. Plus the man literally pushed that young man into traffic and we get nothing about that being at least attempted murder?! Also I could barely connect to Jaehyun as a character at times because he never once acted human. Sure his hyper sexuality is a form of defense but I don't know...it didn't come off like a young man trying to hide his fear but more of a natural prick that uses anymore for his benefit. There is so much missing, Seojin's mother and her significance to why he even gives a fuck about a man he barely knew, The Chairwoman and why she gave a fuck about Minwoo (Is it Controlling? Love? Hate?). Also the relationship between Jaehyun and Seojin and hell even Minwoo was confusing. He said he loved Minwoo but like did he?? It felt like he was using that man's power just as much as Minwoo was using him for gratification. And Seojin and Jaehyun never had softer moments except for the end and it didn't catch the heart like I thought it would. This story needed more polishing, sadly I wouldn't read this again.
Takaramono wa Hako no Naka DJs