pluckaduck's manga / #Teacher(4)

i mean, i want for mc's teacher and the other tutor to die but at the same time, no? there seems to be a lot of layers to the teacher and tutor. out of context, this could be seen as something like a reverse harem situation with 2 guys attached to the mc, but like it's definitely not the type of guys u want into u, given their questionable morals and uh lifestyle.

the story is complex and twisted, but it could be executed better. for example, i want to see how they know the mc killed his son- bc no one else was in the room where it happened, and the narrative didnt show if anyone was near the scene to see what happened... also, it would be nice to flesh out the father's angst more- eg. adding more details depicting his conflicting burning hatred towards mc and his despair and love for his late son. overall it was ok, this kind of premise is interesting but could be hard to tackle so im not complaining much, but i wont be rereading

the story is well-structured with the entire plot and smaller details planned out from the start of the story. the charas are well-written, most are relavent, and thier dynamic with one another is hilarious and natural. the comedy is on point and the chibis are adorable. the story is structured in a slice-of-life adventure way, but with sprinkles of foreshadowing, so even if each adventure feels random, it would build up to the arcs naturally. also i love seimei; he's that typical kindhearted, compassionate mc who is willing to stoop low when necessary.