pluckaduck's manga / #Supernatural(144)

it's really good, but...why make the boobs so big tho?

very nice. it's hard to find a yaoi+actual and unique plot nowadays (there are too many stories with a bunch of filler smut and a slow plot, or shoujo-vibe shounen-ai. tbh they're boring and cliche, sometimes so shoujo that if the mc was replaced with a female, it wouldn't have changed anything). I like the recurring and diverse characters and their impact on the story's development (like, there are not merely side characters that talk). but as much as I like how smooth the development is, I think some aspects should be more delved into. like the mc's character was a bit lackluster. however, ngl Paulo was written pretty well, i think? anyways, where did father Domingo go? his relationship with teco? who exactly killed mc's parents? what do the latter know? what exactly is Misha? what is the boundary he is talking about? I also want to know the fortune-teller and clairvoyant's story? (like, it was so random! it just made me even more curious!)

jesus christ everyone has a two-digit IQ. everyone influential or powerful person who isn't bad has to be a girl, who just so happens to take an interest in mc (why can't it be a man instead? why can't it be brotherhood friendship shit?). almost every man is beyond stupid and hates him and childishly tries to humiliate him. if the mc was a female, nothing would've changed except for the genders of these types.

an extra star for the novel.

i really do not like how they treat mc so blatantly rude, especially the long-haired guy. and the mc has to be the one to have a big heart and understand their circumstances. um, he owes them none of that.