pluckaduck's manga / #Reincarnation(180)

ch 30. too much unnecessary panels and dialogue, too little action, the art doesn't really help either (it's nice, but I'm not sure it's suited to this type of story. I think this should have more of a somber, tense tone bc of the stakes). honestly, the sequence of events is good and natural but it progresses slower than it should've been. def feel that the webnovel would be better. also annoying how the narrative praise the mc like she's the smartest, most cunning puppet master. granted, she is cunning but the overpraising gets annoying... esp since the antagonists so far aren't that smart themselves. also, it's kinda trivial but the part when the phillipa burst into eudes's room and gets into an altercation with Charlotte is a plot hole cuz it's stated that she was locked up, and nowhere does it mention how she escaped. honestly considering the effect on the following events, was this small incident even necessary to add? it caused more meaningless drama but ultimately didn't really inconvenience the mc.

the storytelling is amazing, the angles, panels really conveyed the atmosphere and emotions of the characters, and the different types of love shown by these witches were interesting and their respective love interests were perfect for them. the first three were the most interesting. esp the first couple's; it was the most bittersweet. the second couple was interesting, the third one was unrequited love, but it was neat that it was shoujo ai. it was sad that lily wanted to die, but didn't want to either bc she couldn't forget colin and philipa. the guy ian, i felt that his personality changed the most, like it was almost jarring how a subdued depressed man who was indifferent to living turned into a clingy "delicate flower" who's so enamored with lily. and then his entire personality was to simp for her. almost felt like fanservice when the author included more of their scenes after their arc. yeah, felt that the side stories and epilogues were dragged. i admit i skipped some dialogue there bc i wanted to see phillipa and colin's conclusion.

ch 25. super cute and wholesome and all, but like many other child mc manhwas, she acts more so like a mature mc who gained awareness at her current age (6), rather than one that regained awareness in her late teens (i presumed) and regressed.

ch76. it's so adorable how mc's monstrous cat, his animal will, turns into a cute little kitty when his aunt calls lol ch87. GO AUNTIE SLAP THAT BITCH. also, i love the variety of all the parental figures in this manhua. like, they're not comically evil ch156. damn, i wish there was more chapters. idk who mc ends up with, or if it ends up being a harem. ye mu, qiao qi, or jian xiao are really great charas with great dynamic with mc

honestly, rather than "possessive lover", i think it's more like "possessive rapist" cuz mc hated him until he promised not to kill her. then it seems like she was instantly relieved of all the stress of constantly worrying/fearing if he was gonna kill her, and chose to just accepted the mindless pleasure of sex. yep, mind break. also, the ml's design is very hot, but the mc's body is so weird in some scenes.

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I've seen lots of bl fanart of this webnovel....but it's not bl, unfortunately.