pluckaduck's manga / #One Shot(22)

sad

def has a lot of potential

the twist wasnt unexpected, but still, sad

it wasnt that sad to me, but then again, i don't have a lover. bittersweet tho.

wow the art certainly carried. the ml is hot, albeit an unapologetic rapist. this may not be ur cup of tea, but it's not even a story, it's a oneshot catering to the kinks of a certain demographic of degenerates. rating a story low bc of u are appalled by the premise itself, not even about the writing, execution or art, is kinda dumb. and IMO the story delivered on its premise. it's dark, twisted, and smutty. and enjoyable.

well, it was a bit predictable from the get-go when the flower was shown... but i admit, i was a bit confused when the dude told her to move on... but turns out i was right the first time. still pretty bittersweet. if it was longer, it will be better