Poison-Eating Healer
ch. 6 hrmm other than his love for his noona, mc doesnt have any noteworthy traits. he bland. like it was dumb and arrogant of him to just straight up confront the burly man without assessing his strength first (he's only e-class after all) so he lucky he was stronger. also, when he said "how dare you try to kill me?" that was dumb. get off your high horse, of course he would want to. he really doesn't have any critical thinking skills, doesnt he... kiril said so before that jin is her partner, but he still at some point thought jin betrayed kiril bc of the poison gas and blood. even the readers could see that only kiril could enter the underground(cuz she's poison-resistant too), and the entrance's location was so obscure that only those deliberately looking for that place could enter it... basically kiril or unwanted outsiders. ch 15. "never lower your head" my ass. if things go south, which logically, it likely would, you and your sister would die bc you couldnt hold your tongue. idiot. there's also no backstory as to why he's such a justice-seeking fool either. annoying how the manhwa try to portray him as cool, but it's honestly annoying cuz it all just came out of nowhere when he awakened. also, not the mc saying cringey-ass phrases LMAO of course there's gonna be that good looking but trashy scum who is a moron and asshole who absolutely hates mc's guts. ch37.
The Player Hides His Past
it's entertaining and the art is nice, but like so many other manhwas, it suffers from a lack of depth and intricacy- like the concepts of magic, skill, and alchemy: what are the core differences that make combining two cause "estrangements" and "unnecessities"? the concept of "ignition" which is a combination of science and magic is barely explained and then suddenly mc is able to use it... fr looks like an asspull. even if we the readers vaguely get it, u really have to clearly explain the limitations so that whatever u come up with doesn't look like an ass-pull. anyway, im also astonished and disappointed that despite being 4th in ranking the magician is not as smart as i thought. it's the typical case of making mc seem like a genius by making everyone else an idiot (but it's not like he's that smart either). for example, the concept of reverting objects back to their original form is not really that original, so i imagine that anyone who is an alchemist saw that would understand vaguely his power at least. and he also said that if he uses "magic" uses up less mana instead of "skill", but isn't "alchemy" a category of "skill"? can u just create skills (like what mc did)? why does everybody assume a player can only use one concept? like no one has any creativity...
What Happens Inside the Dungeon