narutolvr's manga / #shounen ai(25)

So adorable! Wish I could see more.

This really needed some work, whether it be with the pacing,art, or the translation, particularly during the kissing scene at the end. Since it's only 2x pages long, we don't really have time to learn the characters' names/personalities all that well so throwing in some ambiguous text bubbles make it hard to follow the text properly. Tbh, I thought the Satomi was the son's name, then the seme's name, and only now realize it was the uke's name. Why? For one, I don't think the son ever had a name. Also, we see a kiss between the two where someone says "Satomi" without sufficient context or even good placing to show who exactly was saying it. It's so bad that I can't tell if the summary is inaccurate or not.

Oh god so cuuuuuuuuuttttteeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! >.

Haha it was really cute! The parents' characters were funny.

It was a nice enough story, even if the end/them falling in love was pretty rushed. What got to me was the quality. I'm not particularly picky and can deal with double pages, but the person who scanned didn't try to scan all of the words properly so a ton of pages had text that just couldn't be read. It was pretty annoying.

Meh

This was a really beautiful and sad story. I'm glad they at least got to make worthwhile memories together before he died.

More shounen ai than yaoi, but it did introduce the idea of a homosexual relationship so I'll count it as both. But it was alright, not very interesting, but not the worst I've ever seen. This author is pretty good with the characters' emotions- though this wasn't at the depth of Blue Sky Complex, it certainly wasn't just some shallow read. It was never clear whether Hiroto was just going along with Onoda not to lose him as a friend, or if he had romantic feelings as well.

That little brother's character was TOO funny! XD

Ugh the best the best!! So adorable!!!