narutolvr's manga / #shorter seme(2)

Not bad. But I can never understand these Stockholm Syndrome type situations where the uke falls in love after being forced into sex (plus no lubrication). It's more likely that the experience would have traumatized him rather than make his heart thump. If it weren't noncon, or if the author had at least attempted to establish some sort of emotion between them before the sex, it would have been easier to swallow (at least I could have reasoned that his feelings were strong enough to overcome that situation).

This was well done! Wish there was a bit more focus on the main couple but the second one was kind of cute too. And the third one was sweet.