narutolvr's manga / #businessman(28)

This really needed some work, whether it be with the pacing,art, or the translation, particularly during the kissing scene at the end. Since it's only 2x pages long, we don't really have time to learn the characters' names/personalities all that well so throwing in some ambiguous text bubbles make it hard to follow the text properly. Tbh, I thought the Satomi was the son's name, then the seme's name, and only now realize it was the uke's name. Why? For one, I don't think the son ever had a name. Also, we see a kiss between the two where someone says "Satomi" without sufficient context or even good placing to show who exactly was saying it. It's so bad that I can't tell if the summary is inaccurate or not.

It was a nice read, with the main "getting together" chapters and then mini stories of them as a couple. I enjoyed it, probably because I've forgotten the older brother's story and, therefore, his pain. Either way, I like this couple fine; they're cute together. Not too big on the older bro for some reason- characters who continue to torture themselves and make themselves the bad guys always confound me.

Very psychological but still interesting. I disliked some of the stories, liked others, and felt nothing for others but, in the end, I'm still happy that I took the time to read this.

Cute little oneshot about two lovers who question the other's feelings.

I actually liked this more than the prequel! It was cute and less generic!

"Jerk seme" is really the right word for these guys.

Not a bad collection of oneshots- it was still enjoyable even though I haven't been too fond of oneshots lately.

Pretty good. I wanted to see more of Sakikabara though!

Not bad. No rape so yay!

Lol on pg 32 when he said he liked his eyes and those things suddenly changed into somebody else's. I get the mangaka wanted us to see what he saw but damn lol! But it was quite a cute story overall. The extra wasn't bad either.