Bloody Mary's manga / #Romance(367)

Where the hell did chapter 5 come from!? This is a cute, normal (?) Yaoi with good development and consent BUT that whole teacher thing was too cliche and didn't make sense. Then the fifth chapter of this manga isn't the same story, it's a separate one that feels incomplete- like it was a mistake to end up here idk, and oh boi that one is fucked up. I didn't really enjoy reading this one personally despite it being a fluffy romance and I think it's because of the teacher and 5th chapter

I think I liked this one but the characters are a bit off. It could just be the translation but I think the reasoning behind their actions are stupid and unrealistic, and that it was hard to understand the girls perspective. This story has a lot of potential and is fairly unique so I still recommend About the girl: I like her attitude of not holding expectations when you literally just met and only getting what you want in the situation. What I don't get is her willingness to trust and get in a relationship with this guy she claims to barely know the name of and doesn't hold any emotional attachments to. I think that's the lie, that they are secretly devoted to each other but can't say it sensibly as they shouldn't be. Her whole "you look good so I'd love you no matter what" is the most confusing for her "independent and smart" nature, and this contrast isn't brought up by the guy in his evaluation of her (ch. 2).

Good read and a respectful romance. I enjoyed the story, but I found the seme to be a little strange (he was pushy, invasive, and knew that the uke was in school).

This is the best fluffy romance one shot I've read in a long time. But I can't give it 5 stars since they don't get together in the end, it's just cliff hanger like wtf. I still recommend reading this tho since its a really nice couple. Wish it was longer

Second story was too cliche but I liked the first and wish it was more developed.

Very good story and the new siblings/now lovers situation was handled very well. Love the dad and the FL's original love interest. Overall well rounded story with old fashion art that gets better each chapter. Nothing crazy or unique. I recommend for any standard manga romance fan.

So this was almost great. The writing in the first chapters was hard to follow and it seems like the alpha ML was a player. [How is the omega so good at sex stuff when he acts innocent and the alpha acts like a playboy with every girl on call?] I also don't know how the two MC's even got together in the first place since it seems like the omega ML was crazy for the alpha (despite hating alphas and kinda wanting to destroy the alpha ML ??) And he manipulated the guy into biting him. Then I also don't see why the alpha ML fell for the omega ML after that, I can only understand his guilt for not wanting to be like his father. So when the fated pair chapters came it just ruined the whole story. After the main characters got together in such a strange way, they still stick together after being 100% certain they're not a fated pair and the alpha ML cheating (well kinda cheating, I would definitely consider what happened to be cheating). Again, I just don't see how they got past the fated pair problem considering how their relationship started from manipulation to begin with. The omega ML seems to have a dark secret reason for wanting to keep the alpha ML but this is never explained. I wanna like this manga so bad since it started so well, is drawn so well, and I love the reverse stereotypes, BUT I just hate it. Honestly, please stop reading once they become official because the rest is just trash and I wish it wasn't written like that - such a let down Read other comments. The omega is really shitty and I feel bad for the alpha. Someone made a good point about what if the omega's fated pair shows up, then it's not gonna be the same

Ehh I mean the yandere level was high and to my liking, but the ending with the girlfriend thing was just enough to make a meh story into a bad story. The art and characters were just also not done so well. Overall a good yandere story for people who like yandere plots but not for anyone else really.

He had the spirit of a yandere but .... this is bad even for a one shot. Still decent read tho

Wai wai wait... didn't the author just make another huge plot hole by having everyone redo there lives and changing the new novel trastically from the other ones in the series! I don't think that's how the situation was supposed to be fixed .... Nothing would be the same and only Kyte had his memories restored. How was kyte able to change the story even if is in the real world? Couldn't anyone just change it then? And the real real author did perrat dirty. He really deserved some recognition and resolution. I believe it's implied that kytes sister will keep going for him now that she's lost her memories of the dance situation because we don't get anything from her after that besides a back turned random instance after the author and perrat are injured. And what about kytes mother? What kinda person is she really that's never explained, and we also don't learn jack shit about the other guy from the real world - we only learn about his love tragedy. And I feel like all this drama could have been easier handled if the author just fucking tried to explain how the power works only in HER world to the lunatic side character she fucked up the appearance of (his reasoning for going crazy also doesn't make sense). I feel like just re starting from childhood was bad and made every one's experiences kinda pointless. She should have just corrected it with the plot hole guy. Despite all the issues I have with the plot of this one I'm still giving it five stars as it holds a special place in my reading log. The premise is so simple yet so rewarding (realizing the book you wrote created a whole world and now characters are seeing it too and all that). The art is pretty nice. The characters were well done for what was expected of them, and no part got too dramatic or annoying or overdone. It was a refreshing read with an easy romance and everyone had a happy ending (the perrat thing was really disappointing the but the redo of the whole book at the end cancels all that out anyway). I like it a lot .... actually