Seishun Girigiri Outline
Fruit, Gateau au Chocolat
Perfect. Great fluff, very little drama. Good mood.
Kore Wa Kitto Yume No Naka No Kiss
The romance was really ... shallow. Like they fucked and were comfortable with each other so they're like madly in love now? The uke and seme didn't really know each other but were suddenly super devoted to each other. And the uke was way too feminine, things didn't add up. I hate the whole "I'm gonna break up with you, assume everything, and say nothing before slamming the door in your face, but it's okay because nothing is gonna be resolved until you realize you're the whole problem and come apologize to me and beg to have me back" trope. The second story was WAY WORSE. Absolutely ridiculous, the author doesn't know what love means.
Shishunki Cherry Bullet
Nearly perfect! Definitely worth a read or a skim. I wish the friends found out ...
Mouken Darling to Donkan-chan
Great plot, art, and writing. The sex was very tastful as well. Love the guy's yandere vibes. Definitely a favorite
Kouryaku Syndrome
3.5 First story was pretty good, but could use a lot more development (was too rushed, had to result to the "fall in live with me because I'm raping you" cliche) No real discussion involved, like how he knew he was into a GUY after being do into this girl... The second story wasn't very good at all, skipped. I recommend only for readers used to the older yaoi cliches since newer readers may be turned off
Koi No Jikan
It was ... alright. The art was meh and the plot was worse. The character development was awful- I mean what even was the seme's personality?? and view on things like suddenly becoming gay because a much older guy who is also your teacher kinda resembles your childhood best friend. Like no questions asked he was in love then when someone told him that, he was like oh okay I guess I like the uke actually.... The characters also talk to each other like children
Ore no Doukyuusei ga Binkan sugite Yabai
The best one-shot!! I love this one so much oh my gosh, I just wish the friends actually found out O(≧∇≦)O !!
Senwaku Porno
4.5 Amazing porn with plot! The only thing that made me take half a star off was that tattoo thing. The antagonist wasn't.... antagonist enough? by the end chapter it felt strange to have been so dramatic with the tattooing stuff :/
WE ARE NOT GAY!