Bloody Mary's manga / #Drama(248)

So this was almost great. The writing in the first chapters was hard to follow and it seems like the alpha ML was a player. [How is the omega so good at sex stuff when he acts innocent and the alpha acts like a playboy with every girl on call?] I also don't know how the two MC's even got together in the first place since it seems like the omega ML was crazy for the alpha (despite hating alphas and kinda wanting to destroy the alpha ML ??) And he manipulated the guy into biting him. Then I also don't see why the alpha ML fell for the omega ML after that, I can only understand his guilt for not wanting to be like his father. So when the fated pair chapters came it just ruined the whole story. After the main characters got together in such a strange way, they still stick together after being 100% certain they're not a fated pair and the alpha ML cheating (well kinda cheating, I would definitely consider what happened to be cheating). Again, I just don't see how they got past the fated pair problem considering how their relationship started from manipulation to begin with. The omega ML seems to have a dark secret reason for wanting to keep the alpha ML but this is never explained. I wanna like this manga so bad since it started so well, is drawn so well, and I love the reverse stereotypes, BUT I just hate it. Honestly, please stop reading once they become official because the rest is just trash and I wish it wasn't written like that - such a let down Read other comments. The omega is really shitty and I feel bad for the alpha. Someone made a good point about what if the omega's fated pair shows up, then it's not gonna be the same

Pretty bland. The characters were meh. I didn't really like the straight guy. Wouldn't hurt to skip this one

Ehh I mean the yandere level was high and to my liking, but the ending with the girlfriend thing was just enough to make a meh story into a bad story. The art and characters were just also not done so well. Overall a good yandere story for people who like yandere plots but not for anyone else really.

He had the spirit of a yandere but .... this is bad even for a one shot. Still decent read tho

Not a good dj, don't recommend

The second story was very cute, and the first story felt incomplete and kind of annoying. I mean, what's up with the blonde guy - how he talks to people? The first story was definitely poorly written and they completely overlooked the whole UNCLE thing. Like they focused on being gay, but not the huge elephant in the room. Thought the first story progressed very strangely but was decent enough. Don't recommend this tho

Three chapters. Honestly terrible. Art wasn't bad tho

Meh. I couldn't finish this one. The art is great and smut scenes are nice, but not nice enough to make up for the poor writing. Couldn't follow and it seemed like a bad premise to begin with. Don't like how the uke acts (and the seme but didn't read far enough to care)

Wai wai wait... didn't the author just make another huge plot hole by having everyone redo there lives and changing the new novel trastically from the other ones in the series! I don't think that's how the situation was supposed to be fixed .... Nothing would be the same and only Kyte had his memories restored. How was kyte able to change the story even if is in the real world? Couldn't anyone just change it then? And the real real author did perrat dirty. He really deserved some recognition and resolution. I believe it's implied that kytes sister will keep going for him now that she's lost her memories of the dance situation because we don't get anything from her after that besides a back turned random instance after the author and perrat are injured. And what about kytes mother? What kinda person is she really that's never explained, and we also don't learn jack shit about the other guy from the real world - we only learn about his love tragedy. And I feel like all this drama could have been easier handled if the author just fucking tried to explain how the power works only in HER world to the lunatic side character she fucked up the appearance of (his reasoning for going crazy also doesn't make sense). I feel like just re starting from childhood was bad and made every one's experiences kinda pointless. She should have just corrected it with the plot hole guy. Despite all the issues I have with the plot of this one I'm still giving it five stars as it holds a special place in my reading log. The premise is so simple yet so rewarding (realizing the book you wrote created a whole world and now characters are seeing it too and all that). The art is pretty nice. The characters were well done for what was expected of them, and no part got too dramatic or annoying or overdone. It was a refreshing read with an easy romance and everyone had a happy ending (the perrat thing was really disappointing the but the redo of the whole book at the end cancels all that out anyway). I like it a lot .... actually

Just absolute perfect I have no words this was an amazing and complete fulfilling story a piece of art