Bloody Mary's manga / #Beautiful Art(147)

Meh. I couldn't finish this one. The art is great and smut scenes are nice, but not nice enough to make up for the poor writing. Couldn't follow and it seemed like a bad premise to begin with. Don't like how the uke acts (and the seme but didn't read far enough to care)

Wai wai wait... didn't the author just make another huge plot hole by having everyone redo there lives and changing the new novel trastically from the other ones in the series! I don't think that's how the situation was supposed to be fixed .... Nothing would be the same and only Kyte had his memories restored. How was kyte able to change the story even if is in the real world? Couldn't anyone just change it then? And the real real author did perrat dirty. He really deserved some recognition and resolution. I believe it's implied that kytes sister will keep going for him now that she's lost her memories of the dance situation because we don't get anything from her after that besides a back turned random instance after the author and perrat are injured. And what about kytes mother? What kinda person is she really that's never explained, and we also don't learn jack shit about the other guy from the real world - we only learn about his love tragedy. And I feel like all this drama could have been easier handled if the author just fucking tried to explain how the power works only in HER world to the lunatic side character she fucked up the appearance of (his reasoning for going crazy also doesn't make sense). I feel like just re starting from childhood was bad and made every one's experiences kinda pointless. She should have just corrected it with the plot hole guy. Despite all the issues I have with the plot of this one I'm still giving it five stars as it holds a special place in my reading log. The premise is so simple yet so rewarding (realizing the book you wrote created a whole world and now characters are seeing it too and all that). The art is pretty nice. The characters were well done for what was expected of them, and no part got too dramatic or annoying or overdone. It was a refreshing read with an easy romance and everyone had a happy ending (the perrat thing was really disappointing the but the redo of the whole book at the end cancels all that out anyway). I like it a lot .... actually

Just absolute perfect I have no words this was an amazing and complete fulfilling story a piece of art

Chapter one could just make this a one shot for the plot cuz its all right there. Super rushed, no explanations and dramatic jumps in atmosphere. The concept is great so I wish it was fleshed out into a proper rom com, but this is just smut. Good smut tho, my only issue is I don't look the sluttiness of all the characters and how so many "tough delinquents" are into some gay underground sex ring type of stuff. I couldn't finish this one and I know it has other stories in the same manga but they also didn't look appealing so I'm comfortable with skipping this one. The art is pretty good tho so I might return someday

Can't wait for updates. Love it. The girl is kinda awful but the more you read the more you understand and the guy is actually getting everything he wants despite how it looks in early chapters. I love the plot, but I think this manga should be revised a bit as the flow and translation isn't the best.