Bloody Mary's manga / #<3(147)

I think I liked this one but the characters are a bit off. It could just be the translation but I think the reasoning behind their actions are stupid and unrealistic, and that it was hard to understand the girls perspective. This story has a lot of potential and is fairly unique so I still recommend About the girl: I like her attitude of not holding expectations when you literally just met and only getting what you want in the situation. What I don't get is her willingness to trust and get in a relationship with this guy she claims to barely know the name of and doesn't hold any emotional attachments to. I think that's the lie, that they are secretly devoted to each other but can't say it sensibly as they shouldn't be. Her whole "you look good so I'd love you no matter what" is the most confusing for her "independent and smart" nature, and this contrast isn't brought up by the guy in his evaluation of her (ch. 2).

Very good story and the new siblings/now lovers situation was handled very well. Love the dad and the FL's original love interest. Overall well rounded story with old fashion art that gets better each chapter. Nothing crazy or unique. I recommend for any standard manga romance fan.

Wai wai wait... didn't the author just make another huge plot hole by having everyone redo there lives and changing the new novel trastically from the other ones in the series! I don't think that's how the situation was supposed to be fixed .... Nothing would be the same and only Kyte had his memories restored. How was kyte able to change the story even if is in the real world? Couldn't anyone just change it then? And the real real author did perrat dirty. He really deserved some recognition and resolution. I believe it's implied that kytes sister will keep going for him now that she's lost her memories of the dance situation because we don't get anything from her after that besides a back turned random instance after the author and perrat are injured. And what about kytes mother? What kinda person is she really that's never explained, and we also don't learn jack shit about the other guy from the real world - we only learn about his love tragedy. And I feel like all this drama could have been easier handled if the author just fucking tried to explain how the power works only in HER world to the lunatic side character she fucked up the appearance of (his reasoning for going crazy also doesn't make sense). I feel like just re starting from childhood was bad and made every one's experiences kinda pointless. She should have just corrected it with the plot hole guy. Despite all the issues I have with the plot of this one I'm still giving it five stars as it holds a special place in my reading log. The premise is so simple yet so rewarding (realizing the book you wrote created a whole world and now characters are seeing it too and all that). The art is pretty nice. The characters were well done for what was expected of them, and no part got too dramatic or annoying or overdone. It was a refreshing read with an easy romance and everyone had a happy ending (the perrat thing was really disappointing the but the redo of the whole book at the end cancels all that out anyway). I like it a lot .... actually

Just absolute perfect I have no words this was an amazing and complete fulfilling story a piece of art

Noo I need moooreee it's so perfect, I love this story so much but it's only two chapters and feels like it ends out if nowhere

This is just the best