Overview — MAN, I did not think I was actually gonna get hooked to this. What appeared to be another raunchy, NSFW, hyper masculine sex fantasy turned into an unexpected drama with a murder mystery. This is not a love story but a sort of self realization of the effects and consequences of one’s actions. The main narrator is the man; however, I believe to be the supporting character of the true lead, Lumi. She is the driving force of the story as she goes through her coming of age and forces the other to finally go through his own version. My only complaint of this story is the heavy amount of sex scenes that distract from the real treasure of the story. If portrayed differently to heighten the damage of the interaction, I believe this story would have become easier for many readers to accept and digest, especially w/ how the story calls out the male narrator.
Snowman