Amita4ever's manga / #Love(564)

The art was good, but the plot itself wasn't woven as tightly as it could have been. Ended well, but left a few strings flapping in the air.

There was a lot to like about this story. The first thing I liked was the virtuous heroine who kept her virtues intact until (long) after her vows. Granted, she didn't have the opportunity with the hero, but she was in modeling world, so there were opportunities. And that leads me to my first complaint (although, sadly, it's critical to the plot). Being that she IS working in the modeling world, I have a hard time believing she hadn't been confronted with situations and comments like the hero's previously. And then I was frustrated when she left. They had finally done the husband/wife thing and mutually enjoyed it. He had said he had something to talk about that was even more important than the lease. She also knew he was a playboy before they married, so of course there would be an 'other woman' or two, and this gal didn't even insinuate he was still seeing her, so why would she not wait the see what was more important to talk about than the lease? All that said, I still enjoyed the story. The art was a big part of it, and the story flowed nicely. It wasn't bad.

Really beautiful story. The misunderstandings are real. The respect is real. The situations are real. The reactions are real. It's totally believable and wholly romantic. One of the best I've read in a long time. And there is no bed before vows! It is deliberate on his part as he acts to change his playboy ways and show her she's different from the other girls... worth waiting for. Lovely story!