Kashikomarimashita, Destiny
*Extreme Spoilers* I think it was okay. It's a good read but I wish the writing of the story was a bit more developed somehow. The plot is good and so are the "ideas" for the characters. However, I don't consider the characters to be developed enough and I wish the love story between the fated pair was shown. Literally all we got was: 1. They met at a party as kids & found out they were fated 2. The Alpha liked Omega but wanted to hate him instead to say "fuck destiny" so he acts like a total dick to omega without showing any apparent reason 3. Omega has first heat, Alpha shows up, he protects him 4. Alpha decides to give up and show that he likes omega, random proposal, omega gets prego, sudden lovey doveyness and happy ever after. You don't even have to read it, I explained all there is. I mean there is NOTHING ELSE really going on. There's nothing special or any tiny moments to pay attention to, no details, no "natural" progession in their relationship whatsoever etc. You don't get to watch them fall in love at all. It doesn't have those special qualities that make you remember and love a manga. That's why I'm giving it a two. I do like the art style though.
Hachimitsu Ouji Wa Shitsuji Ni Madou
Overdone concepts but executed very well. These were pretty good. I also liked the author's humor. The only critique I have is the "ne?" that was added to the end of every other sentence... It wasn't even a specific character's speech, all the characters did it. It reminded me of those Japanese-wannabes constantly adding "desu" to everything they say.
Kowarekake No Omocha