AliceInYaoiLand's manga / #amnesia(14)

I just reread this. Not sure why I never added it to my remember list. It's short but sweet and heartbreaking. I surprisingly remembered it very well yet enjoyed it just as much as if it was the first time. Even more so, especially after realizing that, makes me wonder why I never added it to the list. I believe I cried the first time I read this. I would've cried this time too if it wasn't for the fact that I'm running on zero sleep at 7 am... I did manage one teary eye though. I liked it. It's bittersweet yet very very nice, a pleasant read.

Their circumstances were confusing for a while there, couldn't tell if he had amnesia or what. Then they threw in a random misunderstanding right in the middle of the confession that was dismissed within a second. Why include that in the first place? The story itself was fine and their chemistry was nice but some of the progression was just too iffy?? Also why even use chapter 5.5?? That's just mean! Now I feel bad for Sora. It was so random though, again, so sudden and then it was gone lol why. There were so many goldfish jokes made against Ryouta that I thought he must have short-term memory loss or ADD, but it was neither, it was confusing & misleading a few times. Anyway, that's what the progression felt like I'm so sorry mangaka-san but it felt like it was written by a goldfish. The attention span was there, and then it was gone, then back again, multiple times. OH GOSH THAT SOUNDS SO MEAN I'M SORRY Side Note: Why did they keep doing weird shit to Ryouta's eyes like that??? I kept thinking that this was going the yandere route. Especially when he looked like he magically had heterochromia at one point. I understand the symbolism for the moment, but it wasn't necessary and again makes the reader think he is yandere. Lmao, I was waiting for him to snap the whole time.

I wasn't interested at first, because I saw from the screenshots that the dialogue gets overly wordy and the page layout is in the style I don't like HOWEVER, after reading the summary, and reading the screenshots, it seems interesting. You've read stories with "low quality" layouts and such before, that ended up being part of your all time faves. So, just give it a chance? This could be one of those, where the story is so wonderful, that you don't even care about the visual. That stuff is rare asf so give it a chance

Pretty good was just going thru screenshots but I got caught up in the story. Ended up reading like 6 of the chapters in the middle of the story oops. I'll wait for this to be completed ~