AliceInYaoiLand's manga / #Teacher x student(41)

The story itself is good but the dialogue was really confusing a lot of the time. The development of the plot and characters was so random and certain reactions from characters seemed misplaced if that makes sense. I don't mean to be rude but the overall writing & dialogue of the story was a mess... This could have been really good.

I liked it a lot at first but I got bored halfway through and then eventually lost interest entirely. I ended up skipping through about 60% of it. I really did like the beginning very much though.