AliceInYaoiLand's manga / #Phobia of being touched(1)

Don't Touch Me! (Zhuang ning)

Complete | ZHUANG NING | 2000 released

Overall, I liked it. However, it was kind of irritating because it felt like a few scenes or chapters were left out and some parts of the story were dismissed in a way? Like instead of a bad transition, there was none, and it felt like there was a random jump forward. Idk if that makes sense. I felt like the uke's sudden ability to kiss the seme came out of nowhere too. This manga was already slow-paced, but to suddenly speed it up like that kind of ruined what I was waiting for that whole time. I almost like the side pairing more, that seme is hawttt thoughhh. I'm not sure if the "mistakes" were by the actual author or if it was by the person who edited the pages to put on mangago that messed it up and/or left them out. I'm just going to rate it 4 stars. It was pretty good and it wasn't average so I don't feel right giving it a 3. ALSO!!! THIS SHOULD HAVE AN ANIMAL DEATH WARNING! I FREAKING SOBBED, IT WAS NOT OKAY TO SHOW THE LIFELESS BODY, IT WAS NOT OKAY. IF THERE CAN BE RAPE SCENE WARNINGS IN THESE THINGS, THERE CAN BE FREAKING DEATH WARNINGS TOO. IDGAF ABOUT HUMAN DEATHS BUT THAT SCENE WITH THE DOG WAS WAY TOO REAL AND THAT BIRD TOO. SERIOUSLY WTF. I'm not okay