Kay's manga / #Violence(5)

The story felt a little rushed and unfinished, no doubt because it had been made a one-shot. However, I felt the story could have been great if ‘fleshed out’ a little more. There was just too much story and not enough space to fit it all, so it felt disjointed (constantly jumping from between scenes prevents the drama from having as strong a impact as it could have and makes the story a little harder to follow, preventing you from fully immersing yourself in the story) and alluded to past events without fully explaining what they were or what they meant,. The drama would also have been more powerful if it had told the story leading up to these events, with the descent into the Nazi’s violent treatment of the pianist and there could have been more story added to the end so that you wouldn’t feel as disappointed at the end.

1 ch in list = 8 ch. total - trans. 2011 - read apr. 2020 (second read) HIGASHINO Yuu Prequel to Juanita No Shizuku

️ ️ ch.49.5=T.ch.55* ️2017 5aug2019 15may2020 (*the decimal point ch. are hiatus notices, author notes and 1 bonus cut: “I Don’t Get It, Gusam” ch.30.5) 5️ - 9.2