mxkorbs's manga / #⭐(2)

Everything about this—the art, the story, the characters, EVERYTHING—is actually of worse quality than the one-shots comics I made with my friends back in 6th & 7th grade. Never thought I'd say that about a published literary work, but as the once-iconic singer Justin Bieber famously once said, "never say never." He also said "yummy" a lot but that really doesn't apply here. This shit nasty nasty

Unbearable. My eyes need the strongest bleach available after looking at the panels, especially anything involving that little demon of a "son". Ch 9 in particular looked like a middle schooler drew it and the truck looks like a stock photo. The pacing is so bad it makes me want to pull out my own teeth. The author had a great idea for the story but had no fucking clue how to execute it. The dialogue, timeline, and personalities of the characters make me feel sick. Maybe my standards are just too high but I would rate it a 0/10 if it was possible. Never read it