mangagolover's manga / #age gap(4)

Okay the first story pissed me off. I can’t stand childish people and I can’t stand playing games. I am not the one. Damn. He was so damn annoying and immature. Oh no one else will give a guy like you the time of day except me like what the shit? He’s an asshole! Only a damned dickhead would say shit like that. No one would want you? You only have me? Biiiiiiiiitch. Get outta here with that shit. Future sel, skip the first story and go straight to the second one. Chapter four is where it starts I believe. The second one was cute. Short, simple, but super cute. I enjoyed that little one shot. So much better than the main, sheesh.

Hmm. Idk I didn’t like it as much as when I first read it. It was hard for me to take Ao seriously. By the way, super random side note, im learning Japanese and have been learning for about a year now. And so because of that when I read this the second time I was able to figure out that Ao and Aka are Blue and Red!!!! And it’s pretty perfect cuz their twins lol. I was so proud of myself. Annnnnnnyway! There were funny bits but I didn’t like the adults lips! I only liked them when they smiled but they don’t smile all the time. Idk them lips bruh are not the move. Ao is...refreshing but idk he just seemed like a honey kid and when things got serious I really couldn’t take him serious. Plus why’s he always so mad with his twin? Like I get he seems like the annoying type but it’s not that big a deal. The miscommunications and shit kinda messed it up for me too. Like you can’t be that naive. No mad will touch you out of pity, get a hold of yourself. So. The art was okay. And the story was okay too. This second time reading it it was all just okay. It was long as shit though. So a lot of story to read which is always good. perfect read. can we get more like these please????

Mmmmm it felt kinda rushed...the story wasn’t able to develop as much as I’d have liked it too and I didn’t even know they hadn’t had complete sex so that whole tantrum went right over my head. And I would’ve liked to see more of their relationship. It was okay. Not terrible, not fantastic but okay. At least it wasn’t meh

Aww that was cute. BUT! Let that be a lesson to all you boys and girls, don’t be letting just anyone into your space! You NEVER know what could happen or what they could do! So be safe ALWAYS. Oh shoot there’s a sequel!!?? IM THERE. I feel for them both I’m glad they had a happy ending. It was short but sweet.