lost_talez's manga / #shoujo(159)

67 MC transmigrates to egypt

ch65 dropped because reverse harem :/ mc transmigrates into body of chitara, a mad lady whose family was killed and she was left to wither as the puppet lord of her territory. She is an avatar chosen by the God of Beauty (aka rabbit), he gives her missions to do, and she can draw gachapon tickets that either give her 1-5 star heroes or items. ML1 (long silver hair) is her first hero aka butler swordsman who helped defeat the demon king. ML2 (red hair) is the other person who defeated the demon king - an equally powerful magician - apparently the more clothes he takes off the higher is defence -.-. ML3 (blond hair boyish) is a super intelligent cunning prime minister, but physically weak. Initially i was enjoying it as i was shipping MC and ML1 (they are the only couple with actual relationship development), but then when the other characters starts liking her out of nowhere and she makes out with all of them i was like eww. She also enforces polyamory in her territory -.- i mean the god only gave her 2 choices polyamory or polygamy.. but yeah hate the setting. Because the god is the god of beauty, there's also the messed up policy of giving "virtuous" men beauty and ugly "sinful" men are scorned. MC also adapts too quickly and readily orders the execution of embezzlers, murderers and rapists in her territory when she took over power. I understand killing murders and rapists but embezzlers? really? makes sense in the current world but for a person with modern sensibilities to order that so easily is kind scary. MC also now picks up 2 twin green hair elves - they look super young and seems like they're gonna join the harem ew. yeah im not gonna read further, which is a shame because it was such a promising start T^T

ch80 (seemed dropped at ch80 in raws - theres a novel w same name that is complete at 2100 chapters lol) typical plot and characters. MC is daughter of military family, falls in love with her grandfather's adopted son, but they find out that he's actually his biological son, however MC is actually an adopted daughter because her grandfather was afraid her mom couldn't take it when her child died in labour so replaced the dead baby with MC. MC ends up pregnant, but because didn't know about her own adopted status, she decides to run away from ML because she didn't want her child to grow up as a product of incest (her grandpa died, ML inherited part of the shares and now officially known to public as her uncle). MC gives birth to twins, give one to ML to raise and takes care of the other one herself. Now ML managed to track her down and they take a DNA test to check if they are really related.

ch33

ch112 MC kinda useless tbh

52 (raws 131 ongoing) ML thinks MC is a guy

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3 （raws 17 chapters complete/dropped)

ch65 dropped meh, the art was weird, feels like the author doesn't know anatomy for face, the faces look wonky and weird, facial expressions are also very stiff, but you get the occasional gem where the character looks gorgeous (like maybe once every 10 chapters). The MC was ok at first, she wasn't too bothered about being married to a stranger, was tried to get along well with the other concubines and basically tried to occupy her time and have fun, while planning to leave eventually, which i like that she's being practical and optimistic, she's also a little silly but nothing too annoying. but after she fell for him she a little annoying with how she would run away with the help of another man and travel together with him even after he confessed to her -.- The author also has pacing issues, a lots of things are glossed over or sudden jumps in conversation. The translation quality isn't great either so that might contribute to the cause. All in all, unprofessional art + shoddy translation + plot/convo jumps made it a little bit of a chore to read. I enjoyed it up till maybe 10 chapters ago then i got a little tired with the subpar quality