loxley's manga / #smut(7)

Main story is great. Side story cost this webtoon a star. The side story bothers me. First, it’s not like MD has a right to be so angry. There is a deal in place. His partner didn’t want to change it. Either live with the deal or break it off. Introducing a second partner to the extent that your first partner is visibly upset/disgusted just to stroke your ego & teach him a lesson is not just bad BDSM, it’s being a horrible person. I dunno, instead of being a jerk about it, maybe try acting like a normal guy and setting boundaries? The side chapter is def. gross. And then MD goes all victim blame-y. Ew.

It was ... fine. There’s no real story resolution, some loose threads, crappy happy ending that reads hollow, and no real character development from anyone. If you’re reading it for the sex ... it was fine. Nothing groundbreaking. I would have liked it a lot better if the author explained more, built up more. Without the build up, the ending is just ... flat.

What... the heck did I just read. I need to go scrub my eyeballs.