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Ok first off I read this thinking it was gonna be pure romance between lancer and ravel, turns out it turns into a shit show drama story. This was honestly ass, is it straight ass?? Well, no. But it's still ass. Lancer and ravel were really cute but there was barely any romance between them. Mid story we're introduced to Adler and Ravel's brother who shouldn't have even been in the story because it just made everything extremely messy and there wasn't even the need for their addition. Yeah sure you added them for more dramatic effect but it was way too dramatic to the point where it was just straight up ass. They should've just focused on Lancer and Ravel's relationship rather than adding unnecessary things to the plot. If they were gonna add adler and ravel's brother they could've just made them into the third couple of the story and made it into a three couple story. We start off with a casual slice of life-like story that seemed like slow burn romance to a fucking shit show. How is that supposed to be enjoyable. The ending was also straight up just shit and it didn't even have any side stories. The ending felt so rushed and so bland compared to everything that just happened in the story and it just wasn't good at all. There were so many plot holes and unanswered questions and the plot was just all over the place. Overall I'd give this a 3 star. It's shit but it's not horrifyingly bad, it's just mediocre as fuck. I wouldn't reread this again tbh but I still liked the characters and their correlations to each other and I liked the concept a lot. It was just unfortunate that the concept had to be wasted on a shit story. I still love lancer and ravel and in my head they're out there travelling the world together.
Baby come on!!