くろ's manga / #Office workers(3)

Ch.5 | 1-5 Art 2 Plot 3 Summary: Shity ex, gets drunk, contract, lack of communication, falls in love Comments: - Plot is to basic to continue - Art is inconsistent - FL is Hella icky for me - ML is like a child with the lack of communication. Which makes sense if he wasn't able to express himself as a kid.

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Ch.24 Art 3 Plot 1 --- Just pure sex. To the point it's bad. It feels too unbalanced. If this was just a bunch of single stories, then it would have worked better. But the "plot" and smut just don't mix. This came from the male's view and the main couple did communicate. But the FL was guilted into believing she was the cause of her boyfriend's job getting put at risked. When they are both risking their job. The girl that was aiming for the ML using his friend was extremely fucked up. So, was the guy who was fucking everyone while guilting the FL to believing she needed to do something she did not want to because the ML was at risk.