Erys's manga / #unrequited love(8)

Bro I’m gonna change that because the other art style is horrid so I can’t say beautiful art anymore the first of course yes it is beautiful but second no jump scare, and I hated it. The eyes are awful.

This is sweet this is lovable this is interesting this is everything oh my God just yes so good I love how the Top so gentle and waited so nicely and thought about the response and what it could be and he fell in love first And if feels a lot like slice of life but so just so good to the point that you could have just random placid just the characters going through a normal day 20 more chapters and everybody would be so happy would read them and see that they’re the best thing ever Oh and even though the art is very standard feel so refreshing and serene just the way it’s drawn just like catches the eye and it doesn’t feel overwhelming I just feel so good

I need more I need more I need more I need more

OK so I’m reading this again like I read this a bunch of time but I’ve always had the same thought this one’s just a little bit more concrete I think And it’s I still think the top is a coward in a lot of things they say or hypocritical not just him also his brother What he said like almost at the last chapter that he doesn’t believe in that stuff that you don’t need to define if anything no that’s not the way that the word that they’re using the works it’s supposed to be not that you are trying to fit everything you want one word it’s that you’re trying to find it in a simple way to the word the they vaguely even vaguely fit the best not your emotions fit the word but yeah as I said like I think he’s a coward and they’re slightly hypocritical because he didn’t want to fully mark him like it’s stupid that’s just my understanding the porcelain skin thing just feels like he doesn’t want to because he doesn’t want to concretely do that it just feels like he’s hiding from something otherwise the story has a beautiful art but like certain things you’re kind of sketchy I’m not saying he’s bad I’m just saying that the Way it was written out doesn’t exactly convey what they actually want to try to convey it could be done in a better way in this one just feel so superficial

OK so the story is all over the place when I’ve been like all over the place I mean like emotional wise I don’t know what to feel I was so uncomfortable with the sexual scenes because they just felt like food traumatic the uncle thing the rain but didn’t really seem like a thing that should happen whatsoever like it didn’t seem whatsoever OK he seemed very weird I don’t know also add the uncle thing to what the hell did the offer go through some shit I don’t know maybe But we 100% realistic if that was did not happen this would be 100% amazing even though it was slightly traumatic with some events I wouldn’t be OK with them being in there besides the rape in the uncle thing I’m completely OK and no I’m not talking about the uncle doing anything bad in that regard it’s just weird like really weird