Erys's manga / #drama(11)

OK

Am I explained this is all just like a world wind tornado love like a tornado Love story it was beautiful I love the concept like it’s really good you should really try it from things will put you off a little bit but just work through those

OK so I’m reading this again like I read this a bunch of time but I’ve always had the same thought this one’s just a little bit more concrete I think And it’s I still think the top is a coward in a lot of things they say or hypocritical not just him also his brother What he said like almost at the last chapter that he doesn’t believe in that stuff that you don’t need to define if anything no that’s not the way that the word that they’re using the works it’s supposed to be not that you are trying to fit everything you want one word it’s that you’re trying to find it in a simple way to the word the they vaguely even vaguely fit the best not your emotions fit the word but yeah as I said like I think he’s a coward and they’re slightly hypocritical because he didn’t want to fully mark him like it’s stupid that’s just my understanding the porcelain skin thing just feels like he doesn’t want to because he doesn’t want to concretely do that it just feels like he’s hiding from something otherwise the story has a beautiful art but like certain things you’re kind of sketchy I’m not saying he’s bad I’m just saying that the Way it was written out doesn’t exactly convey what they actually want to try to convey it could be done in a better way in this one just feel so superficial

I remember reading this before but I didn’t like this specifically but I liked it it was still really nice and it wasn’t fact I’ll be there I don’t know why some tags are like that

OK so the story is all over the place when I’ve been like all over the place I mean like emotional wise I don’t know what to feel I was so uncomfortable with the sexual scenes because they just felt like food traumatic the uncle thing the rain but didn’t really seem like a thing that should happen whatsoever like it didn’t seem whatsoever OK he seemed very weird I don’t know also add the uncle thing to what the hell did the offer go through some shit I don’t know maybe But we 100% realistic if that was did not happen this would be 100% amazing even though it was slightly traumatic with some events I wouldn’t be OK with them being in there besides the rape in the uncle thing I’m completely OK and no I’m not talking about the uncle doing anything bad in that regard it’s just weird like really weird

Besides a couple kinks and that some areas are a little bit messy I enjoyed the crap out of this