Erys's manga / #Beautiful Art(25)

I liked it a lot but it felt very incomplete the characters didn’t like they don’t want to put together but there wasn’t enough insight kind of like you already got everything set up but emotionally it felt very incomplete the way the story was shown in some ways it was good but another Waze just felt off it’s kind of like they put a puzzle together put the picture that shows up is very disturbing it’s beautiful but the background just feels very offputting and it’s not even with a couple somethings don’t feel like they suit the character some of those things feel half assed enough exactly by the creator but more like by the characters if you think about the top he makes a lot of sense in some areas his character makes no sense if you think about it very carefully in the bottom just feels like what the fuck are you doing Don’t get me wrong if you have decided to read this and read this comment it is very good it’s not like you shouldn’t read it but that’s the whole reason why I’m only giving at three stars

This is the cutest the most luckiest the most understandable the most everything oh my god is this beautiful like it’s just so so beautiful you don’t know the love that I have for this it’s insane if you like BL if you like sexy guys if you like Omega verse this has an arrangement marriage thing it’s after married by the way that we got most of everything but it’s so fucking good like oh my god is it good just just just read it

I need more this was way too quick but it’s awesome and amazing and I love it so so so so much and it’s so hard to see switch couples oh my God I love this and I need more

This is sweet this is lovable this is interesting this is everything oh my God just yes so good I love how the Top so gentle and waited so nicely and thought about the response and what it could be and he fell in love first And if feels a lot like slice of life but so just so good to the point that you could have just random placid just the characters going through a normal day 20 more chapters and everybody would be so happy would read them and see that they’re the best thing ever Oh and even though the art is very standard feel so refreshing and serene just the way it’s drawn just like catches the eye and it doesn’t feel overwhelming I just feel so good

In some areas I could’ve had more development but it was a little bland a little bit there and there but it’s very even I really liked it looks really tasty like it’s still so equal I fucking love that other than the little parts of felt a little bit like wait what or a little bland other than that this shit is beautiful

Am I explained this is all just like a world wind tornado love like a tornado Love story it was beautiful I love the concept like it’s really good you should really try it from things will put you off a little bit but just work through those