Erys's manga / #Alpha x omega(3)

OK I will say that I don’t know if it’s a translation theme I don’t think so but in some paragraphs the way things were not just described that the image of the images were fine the wording is off it’s not a sophisticated and it’s flowing as it should and the impact is not enough but I will say I don’t do excruciating obsession like this most of the time but this was actually very well done I quite enjoyed this like a lot I also really like how hard it didn’t I made it seem like it was a love triangle but it wasn’t and I like that because I don’t really like love triangles

I know there’s gonna be some for like the friends and stuff and I’m dying because I can’t comment this is the best I got I really love this like I really do but like it’s so hinted that they’re actually have siblings and that’s why they seem like a super pure bred because they are half siblings movie is kind of an analogy of the real life meaning I’m just gonna disregard that whole analogy in that hole as possibility like that never happened I’ll handle it you regarded that it was quite a nice breed it was simple fast like usually every five chapter one is sometimes it was an extremely messy it was a very well thought out but even though it was so simple made you very attractive to do itI also love the way that it was portrayed

Besides a couple kinks and that some areas are a little bit messy I enjoyed the crap out of this