etien's manga / #dark(40)

Rushed ending, but the story was really strong and well thought.

Looks like a cliche shoujo in the beginning but rapidly takes a dark turn. Manipulative psychopathy is the essence of this story.

The story had promises. The execution...not so much. The characters are flat with no depth, almost like clay sculptures themselves. The author obviously have not worked with clay or she would know at least half of the stuff she attributed to the sculptures are physically nonesensical. The dialogues are excrutiatingly dull and child like. This is a master class in how to ruin a good story.

This was beautifully narrated and drawn. One of a kind mixture that you rarely come across.