supremecurt's manga / #unrequited love(82)

I liked the first story. I never finished this since I was too attached to the first story for some reason lol. All the stories have potential, I like them, but the other two chapters are open-ended so :'(

I've read the raws. This is so beautiful. I like how Zariya-sensei used the bird metaphor for Arata.

There were multiple instances where the panel flow is disconnected, thus making it a bit hard to follow-through. The script is also a bit confusing, not sure if it's the translation or just the actual script itself, cannot tell. The author seems to have a lot of ideas and ended up cramming them in short chapters. Has potential, but still needs refinement. Update: The character that had the most impact was Yone-senpai. Even if the author is shoving the first couple down my throat I couldn't help but gag a bit. I just wasn't invested on them that much. I think it's 'cause the main characters are too out of it (almost too much) that Yone-senpai was a breath of fresh air. Changed rating from 3 to 4 'cause of Vol 3. Volume 3 was so juicy! Ao has the assertiveness Yone-senpai lacks; they balance each other out and I'm living for it