conanran's manga / #could have been way better(2)

poor uke he was cute but the seme was an asshole! ugh i wanted him to stop caring for the seme! he deserves someone better! still he was starting to annoy me for putting up with the seme's crapy attitude! he kinda irrked me like a shoujo heroine

hmm so how should i say this? again , this other seems like some1 id love their work but always ends up not so much! ! too much blushing and too much smut? idk it could be much better