Moose537's manga / #Bad writing(3)

Ivy King

Complete | kurihara aoi, nitou akane,kuru hinata | 2000 released
2020-09-17 04:46 marked

Disappointing tbh, the character's decisions make NO sense and the ending is super fast, basically nothing really happens? I'm a little curious about the original novel but this manga is garbage.

Personal Succubus

Complete | Ellen Chain | 2000 released
2020-12-07 09:36 marked

The main character makes no sense. Like, "oh I love to hang out at the church and pray all the time, and want to save my chastity for marriage! But I guess if this guy who appears to be the LITERAL ACTUAL DEVIL shows up and sexually assaults me enough times, then it's fine. Oh, he appears to have placed some kind of mark on my body that probably plays some role in corrupting my soul and turning me into a demon and condemning me to hell for all eternity? Guess I better talk to that jealous bitch who threatened to cut me yesterday, no other choice! Not like I could, y'know, go see a priest for an exorcism or some shit! I mean, what kind of church even has priests? The one I love to pray at ALL THE TIME BECAUSE I SURE DO LOVE PRAYING never has anyone else there and appears to not only be completely abandoned, but is also a favorite hangout spot of the LITERAL ACTUAL DEVIL. I guess I'm not even concerned about the whole "condemning my soul to hell" bit either, I haven't really thought about it, I'm more worried about my chastity and whether my sister thinks I'm banging that hot guy because hOw EmBaRraSsInG and not because he's the LITERAL ACTUAL DEVIL (unless he uses that repeated sexual assault loophole.... if he forcibly kisses you enough times you have to fall in love, them's the rules buddy).

My Beast Son's in Heat

Complete | Sanche | 2000 released
2021-10-03 18:45 marked