Zarita's manga / #Time Slip(5)

Can't tell if this story is a time paradox or alternate realities. It's too disjointed.

This may not be great, but the author did a pretty good job at developing the feelings surrounding each character. The consequences of both action and inaction, and overall it ends on a positive note.

ch 69. The character development is very choppy and a lot of the panels miss the main point. There is a lot of missing content but the base story isn't bad. It's all very 2 dimensional and choppy.