Zarita's manga / #Stupid(5)

Ch 33 The term isn't zombie, it's supposed to be undead. There is a difference. Also, the development of this is like a bad porn, very episodic with no actual development or reasoning, just a basic idea to justify whatever you want to do. There is no consistency or congruency. He is on and off allergic to sunlight. He was using a parasol to keep from burning but then never picked it back up. It hasn't been stated that his resistance has improved at any point yet he can magically deal with it whenever they want. There are a bunch of people and scenarios that have no logical point or purpose. His suit gets damaged by bullets and then is magically repaired. There is no replacement bodyguard when he isn't present. He leaves his job whenever he wants even though he knows his charge is in danger. If he's investigating for his employer then it should have been accepted that he wouldn't be on guard duty at those times. There are too many loop holes and inconsistencies in not just the plot, but the characters and the dialogue as well. Overall, this series is crap.

The main female has no purpose other than to be raped and impregnated. Seriously, there is no point to her, I thought she was going to be a main character, instead she's just a piece of meat. Also, the fetus of evil escaped at the end. Seriously? You didn't even properly bless their final resting place? Also suicide is considered inherently evil in almost all religions so by doing that noble death they just fed the evil. How wonderful.

So yeah, someone was really bored and decided to write this... Probably for the giggles.

Complete. This is a whole lot of useless BS. It is slightly humorous. I'd rate it higher but I'm not that fond of the characters.