Zarita's manga / #Cultivation(34)

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Definitely not high on my list for this genre. I don't like this guys attitude. He's cocky and not willing to do the work for his gains. Even in the beginning he was completely reliant on Baba. He ignores his responsibilities and relies on others picking up the pieces. Also he doesn't respect his gains, the jade that he destroyed just to rub it in the other guys face is a great example.

Rushed and messy. It's not too bad, but its not good either. The development is choppy as well as the character interactions. A lot of both the plot and character development is missing. I don't know if it's just this version is missing some panels or if the comic is this poorly written. Either way, as a modern cultivation manga it has promise that it's failing to live up to or deliver. The base points are there like hints of reasoning, motivation, and backstory. Yet it's just the base minimum letting us know that it probably exists instead of flushing it out and getting us emotionally invested. Even the character interactions are shallow, multiple characters have been created to make a scene that was wanted right now instead of characters existing and building their relationships no matter how good or bad.

Pretty standard for the genre. Not as bloodthirsty as some, but still basically the development of a murderer. He started with showing his might and sparing the defeated but it quickly turned into exterminating those who fight him.

from chapter 115 on, the panels are severely out of order. It's hard to handle.