Zarita's manga / #Badly Written(6)

Seriously, every character except one should be in jail. Even the main characters should bein jail. Badly written and rushed. Abuse, violence, sexual assault, and pregnancies are overused to hide the fact that the characters, plot, and storyline are weak and abrasive.

The story starts out of order, it's badly written, and there is very little appeal for the main character. Could not stand it enough to get far into it.

This is a badly written story that tries to romanticize a whole lot of illegal actions based on the fact that the main guy is pretty, rich, and "loves" the main character but has issues. Not ok. It's not even a realistic example of Stockholm syndrome, the only way the development makes close to any sense.

This could have been a good story if the characters were developed properly, there was a definitive time line, and there were no previews that have no purpose other than to confuse the reader. The chapters are too short to need a preview and it just adds an extra layer of confusion. Overall it's bad story telling. Things that should be witnessed aren't, and it's like the author and artist don't know what scenes and information are actually vital or significant to the story.