Zarita's manga / #Abusive(5)

Seriously, every character except one should be in jail. Even the main characters should bein jail. Badly written and rushed. Abuse, violence, sexual assault, and pregnancies are overused to hide the fact that the characters, plot, and storyline are weak and abrasive.

The plot is forced. There is no development, just events. None of it makes sense. It's like we're missing everything that happens in-between. from character relationships to how individuals feel. We don't even know family ties. Is the 'mother' her birth mom or a stand in, is that girl a sister or a friend. What is her job? Seriously this whole thing is a giant mess and makes little to no sense.

Seriously, if they put that (expletive) abusive rapist together with our main female character and ruin her relationship with Vinni just because he is obsessed with her I will be so pissed off. Our female lead is very competent and within reason has stayed true to herself. I'm glad this didn't follow the normal route of her being set up by her best friend, instead she has a real friend who cares about her wellbeing. As far as bad stories go, this is one of the better ones. Normally this would have a 1 star rating from me, but as it stands right now it is above that. The rating can change in either direction depending on how it develops from here on out.

The ultimate daddy's girl will rule the world... No, seriously.