TheOriginalPimp's manga / #smut(105)

Would have been a nice story… if in the end his mom would have cheated and there was no incest. Did like the way the writer wrote how the dad dealt with it until the father gave in when his parents said they wanted to destroy the house. I mean when they had pillow talk afterwards and the son said your father is my grandpa, i kinda assumed that he would come back to reality and be like… The part after that felt a big rushed and idm off.. also when the dad said we’re going to live together that Ryou seemed uncomfortable, but they didn't do anything with it or the dad actually trying to comit suicide… i think that if he would have done it but without ryou aftually seeing it… or like when walking back and that he would turn around but wouldn’t be traumatized to the same extend or maybe just die differently…. Or maybe he gets hit bh a car or something just before they moved to tokyo.. and that despite being his so called true love he had to move on…. Actually it would have been more fun that in the flash with wallet the dad then moved to the future and met 1 more time the old and married version of his son…. Like on the parking lot where ryou sometimes visited but that ryou doesn’t say he died just that henhadn’t seen him for a long time or something… and then we also could see that ryou like his dad after 22ish years still loved his dad. Like i mean still i ky and not ethical in multiple ways but I don’t know j just did not like the last chapter(s) bug i did like the last sentence about calling living eachother forever being a curse

42 read It is extremely f’d up but at least in mg eyes it isn’t glorified. Everyone is shown damaged in their own ways and it at least gives the impression of complexity. Commander should be the biggest asshole ever and he used to be… i mean he is to anyone else, but we know he wants to be exclusive with our mc, i mean is he our mc(?). He f’f it up in the beginning cuz of how he usually goes about these things and what his dad and that organization did to him… well he got a certain way… no one is happy and everyone does and say bs they don’t mean cuz of their pride…. Its enticing cuz you don’t know what they are going to do because they are also pretty selfdestructive & our mc does not love the ml & tbh a side character story with vice commander would be more enjoyable… like its the elijah pf the story in a way.