That Fujoshi's manga / #yaoi(1535)

LAST READ CH 4

4/5 Shit was pretty fucked up Even more fucked up than killing stalking No spoilers review Seme kills uke and wakes up to his own dead body in another world, the second world's seme actually killed by uke of second world. This lowkey reminds me of the Future Diary anime... //Only downside: it was a bit fast faced and if author wanted, they could have expanded it and given it more details//

SPOILERS . . . . . . . . . . . . . Just completed this and I must say it's really twisted but honestly some things haven't been explained 1. CHEMISTRY didn't exist.. and tbh it's not like one day u woke up in that era and realise you're gay and your crush is gay too lol and that crush being your brother They only met each other as children and I'm sure none of them has se*ual feelings for each other so it felt very weird that they did s*xual acts after meeting so long... 2. THE FIANCEE felt unnecessary.. I think the author had something more on mind but randomly using the fiancee felt way too weird.. like for Cedric marrying anyone without love is ok? Like wtf I thought u said u wanted ur brother to be your only family...? 3. TOO MANY character name introductions, just felt unnecessary, the uke's co-workers and as well as the mansion keepers lol 4. EXPLANATION we're never given much detail about what actually happens to the paradise day kids and after all that where do they go, technically there were pictures of their after effects but it just didn't feel right as also the end about the mother ghost being there also didn't feel clear or maybe I'm just dumb 5. UNNECESSARY DRAMA wtf r*pe like what dude I've read r*pr in fic too many times to count BUT it just felt unnecessary and unexpected here, almost as if the author wanted to create some p*rn with plot sh*t lol

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