quack's manga / #smut(1185)

The art was very pretty and some of the character developments were nice but the plot was way too fucking long and the story made itself drag on. I really become bored when reading this and have to skim through the chapters. The only reason why I'm reading this is to get to the ending and thats it. Both semes and uke were both selfish with what they wanted and just lead people on. They all got character development which was nice but the development was to late in my perspective correct me if im wrong. I cant remember the plot whatsoever but I really am curious why they chose the step brothers plot, like I get its a very common trope but why with this approach? I also want to know if the author wanted to take a realistic approach to this story or a unrealistic approach cause that would change my perspective slightly more but not the most. In the end I am no writer but the story writer really could've made the plot way more shorter and easier to understand so it would be a enjoyable read to me atleast. But thats all my opinion so dont come at my fucking throat.