This..deserves WAAAAAY more recognition. I don’t think you guys realize how much of a MASTERPIECE this is. How real and just- wow I’m still lost for words. I myself expected the whole character developments and the whole lot of that but to be hit so. Damn. Hard. Enough to have whiplash at how good the ending was.
Those ending words hit me so hard that google maps can’t find me. This is so truly underrated and while I would l o v e for an AU in which they work things out, as it is now is how it should be seen. Because Nathaniel had so much expression throughout the whole thing. His care for his brother, his hate towards Fabian, the l o o k In his damn eyes. *chefs kiss*. And the author made them so human like. So realistic. In how Nathaniel even explains how he can’t hate Fabian too much because he’s like a kid for how he was raised. And FABIAN. Woo. He made me a bit mad with licking up Nathaniels bro like that but I believe he could have been better and I’m sure he’ll learn that now I guess the hard way. Fabians character really stood out to me because he isn’t like other story MLs I’ve seen where they have the regular coocoo cachoo troupe. He had in-depth character too even if it wasn’t seen as much. With the way he looked at Nathaniel and his teasing just as a kid would. Truly truly remarkable. And while I didn’t go into this story knowing it was short (and never usually do go for that type) this was really worth the read. And I never comment. Ever. Reply’s maybe but this just deserved praise.
(I’m still in shock. Nathaniel is a bad bitch. Fabian is cutie as hell. And I’d date his bro.)
*salutes*
Burns