Don't Touch Me (Leenong)
@50 (fin of main story, idk if we get extras) Update after 50 = Still pissed that the uke didnt hold his "friend" accountable for ANYTHING. But otherthen that a great story! A solid 8/10 Interesting plot, and I love both ML's! And hate the side dude childhood friend who suddenly showed up. F off 25+26 = JEEZZ THIS "CHILDHOOD FRIEND" SUCKSSSS! F OFF, go die in a gutter you weird freak 27 = LMAO THIS MOM JESUSS, INSANE ADVICE HAHA, but I Stan her cause good mom who wants her son to not be alone 32 to 36 = YYEEYUEEEE!!!! YAYAYAYAYAY!!! KISSSSSSSSSSS KISSISISIISISIOSOSIISISISIJSISIISISISISIISI!!!!!!!!! 37 to 41 = Hi, ugly ass rat ass childhood "friend". The line towards HELL is on your left, please take the more painful route where you get eaten by sharks as well. Thanks. 44+45 = fckng disgustibg. The fact that the ugly trash "friend" of the uke now suddenly says "I felt this place was fishy from the start", when HE is the one who kept manipulating the seme into going there and "getting fixed" because "you are harming the uke possibly" is SOOO FCKING DISGUSTING! SO ITS FINE FOR THE SEME TO POSSIBLY DIE FROM A CULT, BUT WHEN UKE WANTS TO GO IN THE BUILDING ~SUDDENLY~ YOU ADMIT ITS A SKETCH CULT?! Absolurely infuriating, leave the seme alone you SCUMBAG. 46-48 = now the seme beeaks up wirh the uke BECAUSE of all the MANIPULATIVE LIES that the ukes "friend" told him, claiming he is harming the uke. The uke finds out and seriously just says "what can I do, it already happened and you did it to protect me", wtf? No, he did it because he has a pathetic crush on you and is an obsessive POS who thinks that justifies manipulating the seme who has had nothing but HELL foe his WHOLE LIFE! AND BECAUSE OF RHE CRAP HE SAID, THE SEME ALMOST DIED FROM A CULT?! NONE OF THAT YOU CAN GLOSS OVER. There is a certain point where being "nice and forgiving" becomes "naive and idiotic" 49+50 = YYAAAYYY THE UKE COLLABS WITH THE SEME'S MOM AND GETS THE SEME OUT, AYAYAYAYA HAPPY ENDING! hope we get some extras
The Path Of Star
Hydrangea Cage
KYUUSO NEKO O KURAU
Again
@60 Update 2 = bullying subplot was so sub par, borderline ignorant af, and just such a childish and dumb mess. Combine that with everything else being boring and Nokyoung having the most bland "I'm nice guy and that's it" bland character. Seriously wish the author fleshed him out more, but instead of having more personality he became more bland as the story went on, 4/10 at best Update = oof, its getting more and more boring every chapter. The uke nokyoung has no personality at all istg, he's like a wet blanket. Nice plot! ML is an actor who had a horrible personality, then his dex tape got leaked and people were homophobic, then he got attacked by acid and burnt his face, then the 1 guy he trusted threw him away so he commits suicide. But his dead mom is a shaman and reincarnates him back 3 years in time, and he is now determined to get AWAY FROM THAT EVIL BASTARD who abandoned him! 20 = AHHHH love it 28 = SCREAMING WHEEZING DYING CRYING LOVING BLUSHING KYAAAA 30 = LMAO. Imagine telling someone "I have a lot of free time to meet", the person replying and saying they are busy but will call to meet when they can, and then getting mad saying you aren't on standby? LMAOSIS! so ridiculous but I LOVE IT cause its realistic and relatable. AHH love it 31 = leave my baby nokyoung alone omg :( 32 = UUGAJAHVAA AAAHHH I LOVE ITT, THE FLORTTINNGGGG SHEESSHHH!! 33 = AAHHHH STAPH THE CUTENESS WOWOHHHABIAIHA!!!!!!! and hellyea Astar is established! 34 = yess, an author who doesn't cause dumbmisunderstanding and makes the charas clarify stuff YEAH! also HOT FLIRTING HAHAGAHS 35 = YYAYAYAY MORE FLIRTING!!! and also F off parents, jesus. When will they go in prison and burn. 36 = Y.E.S !!!!! 37+38 = Nokyoung bby you cute but MYGODD!! How often can a man make it obvious that they are interested, flirt with you, make sexual remarks towards you and TAKE YOU ON A DATE, for you to get that they like you?! Almost every chapter is nokyoung wondering if he trult is liked?! jfc. JUST BANG ALREADYYY 40 = watch this be something basic like "he had stomache pain and went to the hospital" 41 = glad I was right and the hospital thing was just nothing, just his grandpa. But, wtf?! Nokyoung couldve easily ran out that street, instead of just standing listening to a criminal bruh. And WHY IS THAT MAN EVEN OUT AND ABOUT, AS A WANTED CRIMINAL BEING PROSECUTED?! INSANE! UGH COME SAVE NOKYOUNG 42 = OK, so nokyoung gets saved and now we go to sex?! I expected more romance, or idk, nokyoung asking kang to be his boyfriend now that he saved his life??? Instead its SEX and STILL not boyfriends????? My brain cannot grasp this logic, but OK. Wooh 45 = "Life's not a video, there's no replay button". Icon. Legend. King. God. Impregnated. Quote of the year. Merci boquet 47 = you bettr protect Kang and earn him of his shit brother 49 = girl, bye. Nokyoung you are the biggest ASS imaginable rn, wow. Learn to communicate properly, and not be an ass who breaks his heart instead and implies you dont care abiut him wtf 50 = the fact that nokyoung was forgiven so eaaily is clownery, especially when he didnt apologize or even explain anything i--- guess even CEO's are idiots who only care about how cute someone looks 53 = ???? What? This is some weird mumbojumbo 55 = well that's sad af 57 = The bullying story is so dumb and weird, wtf? He got bullied and had 1 wound in his face, that's it. We didn't see anything more severe but ok, and then his sister threatened the bully with a kitchen knife to the point the parents switched him to a new school. And then the parents gave em 20.000 dollars. 20k for 1 bruise onbyour face after threatening someone with a knife and getting the bully to switch schools is definitely more then enough, especially when you know damn well the bully apoligizing would not actually be genuine, and by law in Korea underaged kids get away even with murder Let alone bullying. Just such an odd and dumb way to speak on bullying, seriously pissed me off with how ludicrous the bullying story was
Spinel(baekji)
@42 FIN beautiful but VeRY sad story with slavery. My favourite couple was the side couple of Fritz x Noah, both are very likable! Then the main couple, and I still hate the 3rd couple cause Garnet deserves better. A solid 7.5/10 ML blonde = Rowell ML Spinel tan guy = Dev Prince/emperor and ML friend = Fritz Maurice = Butler Rowell Creepy old rat = Chapman Chapmans poor Spinel = Garnet Dev chilhood friend spinel = Noah Mother of Dev = Maya Father of Dev = Arthur Sister of Dev = Leah After 19 = As of now I went from feeling kinda bad for Fritz to hating him. Rowell was being toucher by that creep Chapman who almost shot him and you didnt do shit. But also I am still disgusted by Dev literally RAPING Rowell for NO reason. It wasnt beneficial to his goal, and all was cause he was mad that Rowell possibly wasnt a virgin? I DESPISE plots like these. Just cause someone isnt as "pure" as you thought, or a "virgin" (literal social construct), doesnt mean you have the right to RAPE THEM. And the author then being straight up disgusting, and making the uke forgive it cause "Dev seemed hurt whilst raping me" is BEYOND messed up. However I feel bad for both Dev and Rowell losing their. Family cause of the opposite side, but am glad Rowell stood up for Dev against disgusting rich assholes treating him like an object. Aswell as Dev TRYING to stand up against the creep Chapman for Rowell, byt couldnt. I hope Devs family is somehow alive though. Noah is also beatiful but how dare you hate Rowell After 22 = NOOO, I feel SO BAD for Garnet! Disgusting!!! And poor Rowell, with Dev trying to leave. After 24 = OMGGG, FRITZ IS AN ICONNN!!! ILY MT GINGER KINGGGG KYAAA, GO FREE THE WORLDDSSD!!! also feel real bad for Rowells past and he wouldnt even eat. After 27 = Poor Fritz losing his father, byt also what an ICONNNN for freeing everyone! And also killing the artistocs who killed Rowells family andwanna get spinels back. A TRUE KING! 28 = Ok tgis just pissed me off. Chapman treated his wife like dogshit, then fell in love with garnet, whilst CHOKING HIM AND ABUSING HIM, and then Garnet just says Ilyt and its fine cause he was crying whilst cjokung you?!?!?! so done. 29 = OMGGG YESS!!! MY PRECIOUSSS FRITZZZ WILL FIND LOVE IN INSANELY HOT NOAH!!! KYAAAA 33 = I feel so happy for the Duchess. You were treated like hot garbage by your family and ex husband, and now are slaying with your clorhing line! AMAZING! still hate Chapman, and Garnet is an idiot since every reason to love Chapman is pathetic. "He cheated on his wife, BUT FELT BAD DOING IT! he choked me, BUT applied shitty cream on my neck at night. He threatened Rowell with a gun to his head, BUT didnt load it", all of these are still crimes or garbage. Feeling bad whilst doing it, doesnt change the fact HE DID THOSE THINGS. But fine, Garnet seems happy atleast. Afrer 36 = UGHUGHGH, fritz x noah is SUPERIOR! I feel bad for both of them tho. Please just get together you cuties After 38 = WHYYY!! I WANT WAY MORE FRITZ X NOAH OMGGG After 42, FIN = IM BAWLING MY EYES OUT! FRITZ'S FATHER WAS SCUM. MAYA AND ARTHUR AND LEAH DESERVED BETTER!!!
Sayonara, Boku no Goshujin-sama
@5.5 FIN The assault at the start isnt great, but outside of that the story is beautifully written and shows 2 victims of the same abuser help eachother escape. Pretty eidiculous how this has a low rating, yet BL's with NONSTOP rape like "kiss me liar" get high ratings, peobably cause people find the art hot. The author did a great job at showcasing the pain, scars and the effects they have on different people, how not every victim is the exact same either. Great read! Wont give it 5* tho cause of it starting with assault, and cause kisaragi the abuser isnt dead
A Thousand Cranes
@35.3 FIN BEAUTIFUL, SHOW STOPPING, NEVER SEEN BEFORE, MINDBLOWING MASTER PIECEEE!!! 10/10!!!!!! LOVEEE this! Its sad, yet beautiful, cute and fluffy <3 Dean and Craig are amazing sniff 26 = Theo can literally go die. Your brother hasnt done ANYTHING other then take care of you, and you punch him in the face, tell him to go KILL HIMSELF, and even after you arrive at a billionaires house, you ask why that person would date a "nobody" like your brother? Nothing justifies being such a pathetic raging cunt. Your brother also suffered, not just you, go die yourself.
kiss on the piano