Escape, Ray
@79 REAL GOODDDD Espers = people with esp powers Esps = powers the Espers have, that are around their body and they can learn to control. Different ones exist, like teleportation, telekinesis, emotions etc. Surge = when an Esper loses control and kinda goes berserk, can cause natural disasters if their power is very strong Kile/Killian = ML brown hair, telekinesis power inherited Lou/Lucy/Lucien = ML blonde esper seme, emotion? Power Ray = Kyle's twin ex-esper brother Lily = Lou's squad, brown hair girl, protection shield esp Flinn Asher = Bureau Esper, teleportation Alec = Lou's squad, black hair girl, absorbing power that can absorb other Esp powers and release them again Rhys = Lou's squad, brown hair boi, brainwash esp Dylan = Lou's squad, blue hair HOTTIE human, potential thug lmao Edith = Criminal Boss, Rays former boss, Esper who makes contracts AND can steal other people's Esp powers if contract broken Felix = HOT bureau Esper and Flinns friend, mindcontrol Aiden = works for Edith Atropos = can kill, take away or give people Esps Dalia = Strong esper that can set traps, special forces Gale Anderson = Chief at Burea Spencer Hill = Gale's secretary Milo = Lou squad, teleporting esper = 54, 63 to 65, 70 to 76, 79 to = 16 + 17, 51 + 52, 57 = 41, 46, 56, 59, 64, 78, 79 79 to = Kile visits Lou and Lou IMMEDIATELY apologizes, which really angers Kile! He screams that he should stop apologizing, as that is NOT what Like wants, he just wants Lou to stop putting himself in danger the entire time, and how seeing Lou almost die infront of him after saving Kile was insanely painful. However this DUMBASS Lou again interprets this as him purposefully hurting Kile and how much of a piece of shit he is, when that is exactly what Kile is trying to stop him from thinking bruh. 76 to 78 = Lou has already woken up, his surgery went well and he is in rehab at the hospital. However, Kile hasn't contactee or visited him yet, not even once. Ray tries to ask why, but Kile says he just feels scared, cause every time Lou was with him he ended up somehow hurt. Ray then asks if Kile wants some time alone as he is starting to tear up, and he says yes. Then Lou calls Kile in his phone! He begs Kile to come visit him even if its just once, so he can apologize, and that he misses him so much. But Kile says he isn't ready and hangs up. Flinn and Ray meet and Flinn almost confesses his feelings, but Ray interrupts and says he is planning to leave all on his own without Kile or anyone and be free. So Flinn says that's great.. 71 to 75 = Edith tries to escape with Lou after he got shot, and Kile manages to barely jump in. They then end up at a house, and Edith seems to be somewhere else in the house. A girl finds Lou and Kile and says that she is friend with Ray, and that when Ray woke up after the accident he tried to escape Edith even though he had no powers, and Edith then got this girl to come put him to sleep. She got close to him in that short time they talked, and she promised Ray to allow him to wake up ONCE without Edith knowing. And so she guides Lou and Kile to Rays room. Edith ends up finding them and tries to ATTACK KILE, Lou then protects him and gets stabbed instead. Edith then calls Ray a monster and that he is a tool, a tool that can only be controlled by Edith his Esp, and how he needs Kile to die next to him. He gets ready to try and attack Kile again, and suddenly a heavy force hits him. Its Kile who is about to surge, as he says he is ready to KILL Edith. He tries to use all his power to kill Edith, but Kile's Core ends up starting to break, which means his power can't be controlled anymore and is about to kill him if he doest get it under control. Then last minute, Atropos appears and saves Kile by taking his Esp away! She then manages to take EDITHS Esp away HAHA! Ray and Kile are saved. HOWEVER, Lou is very cold and bleeding out, and nobody can heal in the current room, and Atropos can't teleport him to a hospital as everyone would recognize her. So all they can do is wait and hope Lou holds on long enough. Its now been a while, Ray has woken up and is getting rehab and living life with Kile. 69 + 70 = Kile saves Lou from some BASTARD guard who was about to beat Kile up, and beats him up. Then shoots blank shots so that Lily and Flinn know their location. But then EDITH COMES, and sees Kile is there, so immediately tries to KILL LOU. Luckily Lily finds them on time and shields Lou and Kile, and Flinn tries to fight Edith and kill him but is clearly struggling with Lily. Edith then tells Kile that he can have Ray back ALIVE, if he just follows him. Kile is really thinking about it even though he KNOWS that Edith is not to be trusted, but he misses Ray. Then BOOM, Lou manages to shoot Edith in his stomachs. 66 to 68 = The squad plans to find Lou and save him, and so Kile is told to go back to a safehouse and will be protected by Flinn and Felix who will help calm him down during potential Surges with his mind control power! Lou manages to escape the warehouse he is in, and stays outside for long enough for the squad to locate his location In the mean time we find out that Chief Anderson made a deal with Edith that he would get Ray, and Edith explains that if Kile dies whilst next to Ray, Rays esp will ho back to Ray as HE IS STILL ALIVE! Edith has been keeping him in his bed, and using another Esper who works for him to put him to sleep so he won't wake up! 61 to 65 = THE PLAN STARTS! Lily and Kile stay in the car and watch guard, whilst Alec, Lou and Milo a teleportation Esp user go inside Edith's building at night. Kile is worried for Lou as he is not a fighting Esp, but Lily says its fine as he is a really accurate gun shooter, and knows martial arts. Lou ends up really being a great hitman! However, Aiden ends up being there and attacks Lou, who then barely gets saved by Alec. Aiden is human however so Alec can't bounce his powers back to him and is holding him down, so the original plan for Alec to go disable the Esp trap is failed, and Lou and Milo go in to try it themselves! Lou sets the trap off, which is only for 1 person and is a ring that slowly closes in on Lou alone, but he ignores it ans focuses on getting Ray out first... BUT ITS NOT RAY! ITS A REALISTIC DOLL! Edith then appears and STABS Milo. Milo manages to escape and bring Kile to them to try and help Lou, but Edith manages to catch Lou and abduct him, his plan being that he will use Lou to get Kile later. And so Lou and Edith dissapears, after apologizing to Kile for not finding the real Ray... PAIN Flinn and Kile then burn the fake body of Ray 60 = Flinn goes to the Atropos and she agrees that she won't tell the bureau all the shit he is doing, IF he allows her to meet Kile. Atropos tells him the Esper who they saw at Edith's place, who was with Spencer, is called Dalia and has trap abilities. 53 to 59 = Kile officially joins Lou's team and hears about all their plans to find Rays body. It took a while to convince Lou to allow Kile to help, but he finally did, eveb though he doesnt want to lose Kile. In the mean time, Edith got an Esper sent by Gale from the bureau to but a huge trap around his building, and anyone who gets in the building and does not have a small piece of his Esp power, will set off the trap. And only REALLY strong Esps can escape. However Lou and his squad, already expect it to be a trap so they want to not let Kile go there. In the mean time Dylan also gets his own workers to come body guard Kile LMAO RHYS ANS KILE MEET EACHOTHER AND BECOME BFFS HAHAH! CUTE! Flinn also joins the convo but is very skeptical about this all and almost chokes Rhys out for trying to use his brainwash on Flinn, and so Flinn leaves. Kile follows him and says it will al be fine but Flinn says NOBODY can be sure of that! They have a VERY emotional convoy, and afterwards Kile goes back to the squad and is exhausted emotionally. We also learn about Lou's past and how he got abused and used by his uncle forcing him to use his Esp for his work. 50 to 52 = Flinn and Felix have to work late night so wont be home all day, so they ask Lou to take care of Kile. Kile is oit buying food and then EDITH appears! Kile immediately recognizes him,and is overwhelmed by his aura, and cant even move from fear. Edith then kisses him for a while, and then whispers that he wants to hear his voice and that he has Rays body. Kile then pushes him off and asks what he means, and Edith says the pictures he sent say it all. He then tells Kile that if he gives him what he wants ( which is a contract), he will give him Ray. Kile almost gives in, but Lou arrives and tries push Edith away. Edith then almost kills Lou, but Lou barely gets away and Kile then uses him powers to hurt Edith. Sadly it was only a projection of Edith, so he didnt get very hurt. Edith then escapes, but Kile is about to surge! Lou tries to get close to Kile to calm him down, but Kile tells him to back off. He then asks Lou if he knew that Edith had Rays body, and Lou says yes. Kile gets mad and asks why TF he did not tell Kile, but Lou starts breaking down crying and asks HOW he could tell Kile, and how Kile and his Esp would be able to handle that anger! How Ray was like family to Lou, and how much it hurt him, and its not easy to know. Kile finally realizes that Lou has also been hurting and hugs him, and asks Lou if he still resents him and sees him as a Ray replacement. Lou says no, and CONFESSES! THEY KISS AND THEN GO HOME TOGETHER SNIFFF!!!!! CUTEEE 45 to 47 = Lou thought he had found an Esper who could neutralize Rays powers, however it was all a TRAP, for Edith to figure out their location! Edith's people start chasing Lou, aawell as Flinn and Ray who were at home and barely escaped! Lou immediately tells Rhys to tell him where Kile is, and then goes up to Kile on the street, purposefully making Edith's people think that Kile is Ray and is with Lou! LOU THEN GRABS KILE'S HAND, AND STARTS RUNNING AT THE SPEED OF LIGHT WHILST BEING CHASED BY AIDEN LIKE A PSYCHO LMAO!! POOR KILE HAS NO IDEA WHO ANY OF THEM ARE! He DID tell Kile it had to do with Ray though! In the end Kile does get slashed a bit by Aiden, and Lily also gets a little hurt, but they get away. Lou then told Ray to NOT come to the hospital, but he ends upcoming and seeing Kile in a bed asleep, and gets mad at Lou for using his own twin brother as bait! Rhys also brainwashed Kile so he wont remember any of this unless someone mentions it, but Ray is still MAD. Ray then says that if he knew Kile wouldve been put in danger, he wouldnt have done all this to begin with and just give up. Then Edith appears behind Ray and says "If giving up means coming back to me, that is the right decision Ray" Flinn manages to save Ray and teleport him away, but he couldnt control his Esp well so all 4 of them end up at some cliff in the woods. Lou is holding Edith back, but Edith then uses anotherone of his Esp powers and STABS LOU WITH WEIRD TENTACLES! Lou falls to the ground, bleeding heavily. Ray now thinks that this is all his fault, and that even though this was all his own mistake, he is the one who came out with not even 1 scratch, whilst Lou his family is bleeding and dying, and Kile is in the hospital... And so he tells Edith that he will nevee be able to get what he wants (Rays Esp), and jumps off the cliff into the water. What Ray doesnt take into account is that he also was in harm, maybe not physical, but sexual and all the trauma. Poor Ray... Sadly Flinn wasnt able to save him on time either, and Ray drowned. Flinn then managed to barely bring Lou to the hospital on time to survive. We go back to current time and Felux tells Kile to get rid of his Esp, And Kile says NO, as he sees it as a type of inheritance left by his brother, sniff. Flinn also tells Kile that Edith knows about him, and Kile then mentions the pictured they received at Lou's House. So Flinn and Kile now know that Edith has aleeady been doing styff 36 to 44 = Flinn explains that the bureau went after Ray as he accidentally KILLED one of Flinns team members, and Dave the guy who died was a VERY strong Esper aswell. So the Bureau did NOT want revenge for Dave's death, but wanted to find a way to get Ray and use him as a puppet for his powers. Flinn actually plans to help Ray, as he is the one who met Ray when he was still young and tried to join the bureau, but didnt get accepted. He then decided to help Ray escape Edith who is a criminal boss who makes Espers like Ray do shady shit for him. Ray says he will accept Flinns help, BUT he need to convince someone for him, which is LOU! Lou says NO, but Ray says he will do it anyway. The plan Flinn made is to DESTROY Rays Esp powers and turn him human, Lou tells Ray he shouldnt have to do that, and that its ridiculous how he is doing all this just to be able to live with his Twin brother Kile who "doesnt even care where you live or what you do", but Ray says he has to do it. Ray leaves to meet Edith whilst Lou and Flinn talk, and we can see that Ray and Edith have sex. Then Flinn asks what Edith's power is, and he says he uses his Esp to make contracts with people, and if they break the contract, Edith is able to take over that persons Esp power! However it turns out that Ray did NOT make a contract with Edith via Edith's Esp power, but a paper contract that was signed in front of Lou aswell, so he sensed that the powers were not used. And the deal was Ray essentially selling his entire body to him, including sex. But Ray sees Edith murder someone in front of him and Edith mentions how Ray killed the bureau guy Dave a month ago, and how he is now meeting with a bureau agent behind his back. Showing that he has been tailing Ray. He then tells Ray that he shouldn't take their contract lightly, and Ray says it was just a paper one. But then, he somehow manages to block one of Rays attacks which should not be possible as he does NOT have a defensive esp, and Edith then put his Esp contract mark which is a SPIDER on Rays leg, and Ray cries And doesn't understand how this happened. Turns out the first time they met just 1 on 1 in Edith's room, Edith said Ray has to give him his everything, body and everything, and Ray accepted, and Edith had secretly used his Esp right then and there and the paper was just for show. He then tells Ray that he knows about Kile and could kill him at any moment. Edith tells Ray to bring him the Atropos who is a person that can destroy, create or remove Esps or works for the bureau. Flinn and Lou decide to help Ray escape Edith for now, and Ray asks Lou to help get Kile into a safe location secretly. And so Rhys uses his mind control power on Kile's mom to make her kick him out and move out to a new location. Ray and Kile them met up once, before they started the plan to escape Edith. Lou was still pissed about Ray sacrificing so much stuff just to be able to have an ordinary life with his brother Kile, who unlike Ray was NOT abused by his parents (they were separated via adoption), and Ray said that the memories he had with Kile from the orphanage are to this day his best memories in his life... IM GONNA DIE FROM TEARS! Ray says that Edith can only take someone's Esp by physically taking it from them, so asking as he doesn't find Ray, his powers are safe. And so, Lou, Ray and Flinn all go together to a secret apartment from Flinn and spend over 1 month there, trying to find an Esper with powers to neutralize other Esp powers to help break the contract. Flinn is worries about Ray, cause every time Lou goes outside to search for Esperrs to help remove the contract, Ray looks worried or sad or something. Ray doesn't wanna tell him, but then asks if Flinn can have sex with him. He says he just want to experience what it is like to have sex with someone who gives you love for once, and how he thinks Flinn could do that. Its cause he had sex with Edith and has trauma from those times, sniff. And so they have sex 30 to 35 = Kile gets picked up by Flinn and he beings him to Felix's house! Felix is Flinns VERY HOT best friend who also works at the bureau with him and has mind control powers and also knows about all the drama about Ray. He is NOT a fan of Kile being here as it can cause trouble for Flinn if the bureau finds out, but he let's him stay. He does use his mind control on Kile as he almost had a surge at the start, cause he got mad at Felix. Felix also is VERY shocked that Kile is even ALIVE! Apparently, an adult who inherits an Esp that is as strong and Ray's power was, in almost ALL cases will DIE. This is because there are only a few ways for your body to deal with such strong power, and most involve manifesting at a YOUNG age and slowly getting used to it. But when an adult inherits the powers it is all at once, and usually killd them. So Felix tells Kile he shouldve never left Lou, as he is LITERALLY the only reason he is still standing here alive. Later on, Felix apologizes to Kile for being harsh, and that hedoesnt hate him but more so Ray. Then Kile asks Flinn what happened with Ray and Flinn says he was being chased by both the bureau AND Edith who was Rays former boss. The bureau was after Ray as he was an illegal esper, and Edith as he wanted Ray back. 18 to 29 = Edith the psycho who has Rays dead body, sent 2 pics to their house hinting at Rays bodies whereabouts, but they refuse to tell Kile about what the pictures mean and how they have been looking for Rays body and that Edith some demon psycho has it. And so Lily and Lou leave, and Kile secretly calls Flinn to get some answers! However he did not check the house well and didn't realize that Alec stayed at the house, so she is listening in. Turns out that the story about there being a 90% chance to inherit your twins powers was a LIE, and that Lou had been following Kile for 1 entire YEAR and was waiting for the day his Esper powers were coming, which he can sense in people when the time is close. For Kile it was 8hrs after he met Lou that his powers started, so it adds up. He did get his powers from his dead brother Ray, it just doesn't seem to be a 90% chance Also, this explains why the Bureau that hunts dangerous Espers where Flinn worked never went after Kile the moment Ray died, cause the 90% inheritance thing is a lie. Flinn can't speak more though as he is at the bureau and doesn't want them to know he is in contact with Kile so they hang up. And Alec messages Lou and says they have been in contact. Alec however did not hear what they were talking about on the phone so there isn't much they can do. Lou is however sure that Kile can't just leave as he still has no idea how to stabilize his own powers and is dependant on Lou, which is an advantage. Lou starts thinking about the things he wish he had done, like tap Kile his phone, and make sure he only sees, hears and learns the things HE shows him. He then leaves early and goes to meet Kile. Kile starts crying and apologizes, and Lou says he should stop acting and pushes him down and says he knows he talked to Flinn, and then starts messing with Kile's powers just like he had done with Flinn. He pushed the powers just enough to NOT cause Kile to surge. He then takes Kile into a car and tells Kile he will help stabilize his Esp whenever he wants, IF he asks for it himself. Kile holds back and says no and that he knows he can do it himself, as that is what Flinn said. So Lou says that's fine, I can wait, and so Kile faints again and they arrive at the secret location in a basement and put Kile down. A barrier has been put around the building swell to prevent Kile from escaping if he wakes up. Lily and Lou also talk and Lou says he will make sure to "tame" Kile before they find Rays body. Kile wakes up and throws stuff at Lou and tells him he won't need his help. Lou still won't tell him anything about Ray so Kile starts thinking about how happy he felt during their date, and his Esp goes WAY out of control which shocks and worries Lou. So Lou BEGS Kile to let him help him, and so Kile accepts since Lou looks worried. Lou kisses him and calm Kile down and then stops before he fully helps him as he still needs Kile to be reliant on him. But Lou didn't wanna stop himself even. The next day Kile wakes up and feels embaressed, but also feels like he always craves Lou's touch when he is about to surge and that he is getting reliant so tries to escape. Lou appears and stops him before he tries to open the door because there is a protection barrier on it that would HURT Kile! He then gives Kile his fav cake and calms him down a bit We then get a small flashback of Lou and Flinn talking and Flinn saying the bureau has put out a shoot-to-kill order on Kile! They think he is Ray. So he asks Lou to keep Kile safe at the secret location. Kile tries to escape but can't and then decides to give in and makes out with Lou, who treats him like a lover. Lou is shocked however cause it truly feels like Kile is in love with Lou's Esp power and addicted to it, which even for Lou is NOT what he wanted. Kile at the same time is thinking of turning his back on Lou once he leaves, as he is still not sure if these people also are out to protect Ray or not. Dylan calls Lou and says they got a 3rd picture for a clue for Rays whereabouts from Edith! Kile wakes up whilst everyone except Lily is away, and he manages to break the barrier at the door now that his powers are stable again. Lily LETS HIM LEAVE because she is pissed about Lou not keeping business and private matters separate and acting very different when it comes to Kile. So Kile escapes but Lou sees him on the street and stops him, Kile then hits Lou and makes him bleed and Lou stops him again. Kile tells him that its clear Lou doesn't even like him back so WHY is he so nice to him at times, yet refuses to tell him what happened to Ray! Lou says if he knew what happened he would hate him, so Kile says be can't either tell him or let him go. And so, Lou let's go of Kile's hand... Kile then goes to a nearby cafe and uses their phone to call Flinn 12 to 17 = Alec, Lily and Lou all leave the house so after they make out a bit, Kile starts looking for ANY info on Flinn and Ray, as he still believes Ray might be alive. Then Flinn starts throwing pebbles on the windows to get Kile's attention. He then apologizes and gives him his phone number to meet and talk about Ray someday, and says he can't teleport him away right now, cause last time Lou messed up Flinns powers so he is still recovering them. Flinn then leaves, BUT Rhys who is Lou's friend and came to surprise Lou with cake, but saw Flinn talking to Kile and calls Lou and tells him about it, and that he wasn't able to hear what they were talking about BUT that Kile received Flinns phone number. Lou is pissed off lmao HOWEVER Kile ends up BURNING Flinns phone number, because he remembers Lou telling him to not open the door for anyone! However he immediately regrets it LMAO, but also thinks its smart cause now he THINKS there is no evidence of him meeting Flinn, which is wrong cause Rhys took a PICTURE of Flinn in the yard talking to Kile and sent it to Lou lmao. Lou then calls Kile and invited him to a dinner in a privaty room, which makes Kile happy as he says it feels like a date. Then Lou has to RUIN IT and shows Kile the pictures and asks what Flinn said. Kile gets mad and wants to leave and cries, so Lou starts feeling bad and hugs him and says sorry but that he wants to know what happened. So Kile is honest and says everything and that he burned the phone number which makes Lou REALLY happy as he is shocked by his honesty and actions. HOWEVER Kile is kind of lying as he told Lou he wants to hear about Ray from him and not Flinn, but he actually memorized Flinns number and WILL try to calm him. when they get out the restaurant, Lou asks Kile why he was so excited for this, and Kile shyly asks its of course cause he was excited to eat with someone he likes! Lou seems to be a lightweight and drunk and asks Kile what he wants him to do, as he is in a GREAT mood, so Kile asks to go to Lou's room which he has never been in. So they go home and into Lou's room and starts MAKING OUT And BABANGGG (tho it is NOT shown) 9 to 11 = Flinn abducts Kile, then apologizes afterwards when he realizes it isn't some random Esper impersonating Ray but his twin brother. Kile almost has a surge happen and tells Flinn to bring him to Kile so he can calm down, and Flinn is confused and asks why he doesn't know how to stabilize his own powers yet. Lou then finds them and asks Alec to take Kile, and Lou talks to Flinn and says Flinn killer Ray so he shouldn't give AF about what Lou does with Kile. He didn't ACTUALLY kill Ray tho, it seems to have been kind of an accident with drowning idk. Flinn says he that Lou already had control over Rays life and drove him to the edge so he should leave Kile alone, and Lou chokes him and leaves. A woman names Edith is also secretly spying on all of this and has Rays DEAD BODY IN HER OFFICE WTF?! In the mean team Kile is starting to doubt Lou's intentions and unsure if he can trust him 7 + 8 = Kile starts practicing his new powers with Lily, Alec andLou, and Lou ends up helping. BUT Kile notices Lou was the one moving the glass by USING Kile's powers, cause that is also a way he can use his powers apparently. In the end Ky Kile does manage to do it by himself tho! Kile and Lou go to Kile his house to get his clothes and go back and practice his power more. Kile does a weird thing with his hand to be able to concentrate more LMAO, and then Lou and him KISSSSSS, and Kile asks Lou what he thinks of him and Lou gives a wishywashy answer about not doing this if he hated him, but that's enough for this dumbass Kile 4 to 6 = Kile's powers start manifesting via a fever, which sadly means Ray is indeed dead. For some reason Lou's touch calms him down. Lou then kisses him, whilst we see a flashback of Lou being called "Lucy" by Ray, so it seems he liked Ray. Kile just falls asleep after the kiss and doesn't remember it LMAO! Turns out Lou is an Esper who can control emotions and feel them and push another Espers powers out or back in, via touching. Similar to the other Esper BL I read. You need physical touch like hand holding for it. Lou pisses Kile off again the next day cause he is being a RUDE BITCH, and so Kile goes to his room as his powers are going insane again from anger. Lou goes check upon him and help his powers calm down, and then kisses him and mentions the kiss from yesterday which Kile still doesn't remember but gets mad about it. Then Lou keeps teasing him about whether or not Kile TRULY hates kissing him, and Kile gives in and says it isn't that bad and kisses more 2 = Apparently, if you are born as identitical twins, and only 1 of you becomes an esper, and then the esper dies BEFORE the other twin, the other twin inherits their powers. So If Ray truly is dead like Lou is saying, Kile should turn into an Esper!
Runway Hit
@60 8 or 8.5/10! SO GOOOODDDDDD!!! The only thing I am pissed about is the psychopath ex, Joohyuk, getting away with all his behaviour and just MAGICALLY CHANGING just cause Seohyun stood up for himself? VERY unrealistic, no character growth at all, and a true scumbag who did not give proper closure (like him DYING). Everything else is LOVELYYY Seohyun = designer Hyowon = model Hayeon = model and Hyowon sister Janggoon = Seohyun friend Baek = red hair president of agency Joohyuk = TRASH ex? Seohyun ️ 33+34, 42, 45, 48.5, 50+51!!!!!!, 53, 56!, 59+60!!!!!!! 11 to 13, 16+17, 19+20, 25+26, 29+30, 35+36!!! 40+41, 46+47, 52 38, 43, 57+58
Save me gently
@79, FINISHED 6/10. 6.5 at the highest DEPRESSIINGGG!!!!!!! it was cyte at the ejd but JEEZ, WAY TOO DEPRESSING! Also the blndr guy had a super sad past, I get it, but he killed a fucking dog and fed someone GLASS, so he really is unredeemable to me, eveb if the author wants him redeemed.
Lost in the Cloud
@54.4 (end of s1) The art is beautiful, but honestly the story is overly dark and depressing with nothing happy. The black hair ML got sexually assaulted and physically abused by his classmates all for being gay, but is also a creepy himself who secretly takes pictures of ginger boy. And the hot 2 colored eyes ML had a horrible childhood and even now gets manipulated and abused by his step mom, and his dad is a POS abuser too, but he's also a lil shit himself. Its just sad on sad. Haven't been any truly happy scenes imo.
Love Is An Illusion
@107 I liked it! Solid 7.5 or 8/10. I wrote a lot of noted but AGAIN stupid mangago deleted them all. But it's an nice read with many coupled and a cute bebe 12, 25, 28, 31, 42, 44, 47+48, 58+59, 65+66, 75+76!, 78, 86+87, 90, 92! 14, 18+19, 39, 45, 48!, 53 to 55, 57, 67!, 70, 73+74, 76, 79, 82, 92!, 94, 96!!! 14, 17, 21, 29+30, 32, 34 to 36, 41, 52, 61 to 64, 88!, 97 to 99 20 = PREGNANT 100-103 = new side storiesof apl the couples, and jfc the art changed SO MUCH and is fully coloured?! Didnt even recognize anyone at first! The ML seme especially is VERY DIFFERENT LMAO. The art imoroved a lot!
Asterism
@80 This went from a kinda cute but sad story, to pure sadness and heartbreak. Its a bit TOO realistic and hits home at times, I've only been crying in recent chapters. Its well written and the art is great, props to the artist, but it definitely is NOT a fun and cute read. Don't read it if you dont wanna end up depressed and heartbroken. As for right now, the uke Menghao is pretty frustrating at times. Like why he would leave Weiyu, just to then go and be with several guys in college, even though he only had 1-2 months left in HS and couldve had that with Weiyu. However, internalized homophobia is real, and seeing how Weiyu mentioned its been 3 ywars, it sounds like it mightve taken a while for Menghao to start dating in college, and even then he couldnt sleep with them. And at the same time Weiyu was an asshole as the start of the story, so both have arcs where they suck. Right now I just feel god awful for both, tho a bit more for Weiyu but also not cause of what he did to Menghao when he left the country. 17 = Blue hair boi Weiyu's perspective on thing. Pretty sad. 19 = Sad 20 + 21 = Meng Hao has nightmare + comes back to school after sick leave and is an icon spitting bars at the fake friends of Weiyu but then also fight together meng hao x Weiyu 22 + 23 = THEY HAVE AN EMOTIONAL TALK, COMMUNICATE!!! AND MAKE UP OMG BEAUTIFULLL 33 + 34 = Weiyu is an asshole AGAIN, Menghao scores low on his exam and Weiyu and him make up again and its emotional, crying. 35 = PRECIOUS SKIPPING SCHOOL DAY! EMOTIONAL, FUN, CUTE, JUST GREAT 35 to 38 = enjoying themselves! 40 to 42 = travelling together all around China for fun + for meng hao to take art entrance exams + some random bitch ruins his exam sad 43 to 45 = they get DRUNKKK and talk about love and styff! Menghao gets embaressed and starts avoiding Weiyu, and slowly but surely LOVEEEE!!! 46 to 48 = TOGETHER UGH MY BBBYSSS!!! 49 to 54 = depressing homophobia wooh, a poor junior called Qin getting exposed for having a crush on a senior Hanxin cause someone took his secret note and put it on the school speakers. He is getting bullied heavily, and even Hanxin harasses him. Weiyu warns Menghao to ignore this and not draw attention to himself. Menghao has enough and asks wtf is so wrong about Qin liking him, especially when he didnt even want the letter to ever be read out and never even bothered the guy. And Hanxin snaps saying he shouldnt have made people know he has a crush on him. Then the 2 otehr homophobic seniors make more fun of Hanxin, calling him a sissy and saying if he really is gay they wont be his friends. Hanxin then screams and akss why they dont suspect the others of being gay, and mentions Menghao'd name aswell, who then snaps and screams "ITS NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!". Weiyu then takes him away and tries to make people not suspect him, but it seens like Hanxin suspects he is gay now. Now scum rat Hanxin spread rumours through the class about Menghao and Weiyu being a couple cause they sneak into class together often, and a girl who has a crush on Weiyu is almost in tears saying Weiyu cant love men? Lmao bye you biphobic bitcH. Eventually Weiyu bites the next of one of the 2 homophobes who also bullied Hanxu and everyone starts calling HIM gay. Then saying being gay is gross. The attention got away from Menghao and Weiyu, but they still essentially "lost" as everyone eis still happily homophobic and a week later everyone acts like friends again. 55 + 56 = Qin still gets bullied and even got his bag stolen and dumped out, and Menghaos father is homophobic, wooh. 57 + 58 = Weiyu has to start living off campus from his dad sadly, so they have a cute day together. They make out but then Menghao sees his fathers face and is scared and stops, poor baby.... They act as friends at school now and see each other less as Weiyu lives off campus, but still text a lot and its cute. Then Qin the gay junior is taken by the ambulance for his Asthma. Something probably happened again ffs. 59 to 63 = Now that Qin almost DIED and is transferring cause of the severe bullying, the psychopaths start bullying Menghao whilst Weiyu isn't around. Hanxu still just keeps watching and lets the homophobes psychos keep going. They then start talking shit about Weiyu and tell Menghao he would be nothing with him, so Menghao snaps and FINALLY BEATS THE MAIN BULLY UP! Hanxu stands up against his friends for once and helps Menghao. Then the teacher stops them and says he will let it go this once, but they have to write apology letters. Then he let's Menghao stay and somehow blames Qin for getting bullied to the point of being hospitalized, saying he should've focused on his studies instead of "admitting" he is gay?! Psychopath. He ignores Weiyus phone calls and then Weiyu sees him later at school and gets mad saying he will beat the guys up. Menghao stops him and says not to do anything and to also not be nice to him at school anymore, and he starts avoiding Weiyu. Weiyu then surprised him in class when they just watch a movie in class, and they sneak out together to go on a small date instead. But then Menghao ends it... By asking to breakup... And he just leaves and starts ignoring 40+ of Weiyus calls and being a POS. They talk after Weiyu forces him to, and Menghao says humans can't be greedy and its impossible for them to someday be able to be together without these people shitting on them even for holding hands. And so they both cry, mainly Weiyu, and so it ends.. Lots of internalized homophobia. 64 + 65 = officially broken up, they stop being friends as well. Menghao joins more group activities to blend in, whilst Weiyu becomes less social. They never talk either. Menghao then walks on the street and everyone reminds him of their memories together. Then his friend calls and says they will have dinner at Weiyus families restaurant. Weiyu is there helping out but ignores Menghao. Menghao falls asleep cause he drank too much and Weiyu ignores him, but Tanxu tells him to take Menghao since its his and his scum friends faults for them falling apart partially. So he does, and Menghao whilst drunk asks him to not forget him, and Weiyu leaves the room and Menghao cries. And so they graduate highschool and it ends. 66 to 69 = Unknown how much time it has been since highschool, but Menghao gets found on the street passed out by a bar owner. Menghao now has purple hair, longer ugly hair, and walks around without pants in a strangees house lol. Then he returns the next day and tries to initiate sex as "payment" but the bae owner already said nothing happened and its NO. So menghao seems defeated and almost leaves but then stays to help clean up the mess Woofy the dog made. We also see a flashback of the Bar owner hearing Menghao say Weiyus name whilst passed out... The bar owner then says he can pay rent now, and Menghao thinks its sex and looks sad, but the bar owner just tries to draw him whilst he lays down fully clothed LMAO! and it looks AWFUL. Then Menghao critoques it, so the Bar owner makes Menghao draw him instead, and then says the rent is paid without even looking at the painting And lets him move in! The bar owners name is Jingyi Fu and he invited Menghao to his bar to watch music performances. And some HOT green haired guy who dresses weird (who Menghao calls a cheistmas tree LMAOOO) is called Liang Menghao then asks Jingyi to watch a movie with him so they do and he is shocked to see Menghao crying. Menghao then talks about his ex boyfriends from college, and how he even started crossdressing cause his boyfriend did. But then we see that he couldnt even go further with his boyfriend either, cause of fear. 70 = We see more of Menghaos past, and how he finally realizes his fear wasnt his fathers rejection, but his own rejection of himself... Then he remembers the times when Weiyu would tell him Menghao will move further someday without him, peobably knowing this would happen. Yet he didnt give up on Menghao and kept trying, but Menghao broke him. So sad. Saddest chapter yet to me as it hits deep. 72 = depressing AF backstory of Jingyi. 73 = More backstory, Menghao and the old art school classmates meet up, and Weiyu said he would come. Menghao is excited but scared, since he just broke up with his ceossdressing boyfriend and misses Weiyu. He hears the others talk about Weiyu and how he changed a lot and his family got another restaurant + he hot a scholarship. But Weiyu cancels last minute and doesnt come. 74 to 80+ = Cunzhi, Menghaos friend, comes to Jingyis house whilst Menghao is out with Woofy to pass luggage over for Menghao. He then assumes they are dating and starts talking about the guy (Seemingly Weiyu) ans how he already left, and how he hopes Jinygyi isnt a bad guy cause Menghao got hit by his dad?! Menghao then runs away after seeing Cunzhi and seems bad, saying he told him to not come find him. They now are trying to find Menghao and cant, and then Cunzhi talks about how he doeent mind Menghao being with men aslong as it isnt Weiyu. He knew they were dating and broke up, but he didnt realize until 6 months ago when their class had a reunion at Weiyus restaurant where he noticed the breakup clearly went bad, and Menghao came in super drunk and Weiyu acted like he didnt exist. Menghao then finds out that Weiyu is leaving and euns to his place to say goodbye, as Weiyu opens the door on the phone with a girl. Then acts cold AF to Menghao, as they havent met in 3 YEARS and Menghao is just asking basic stuff like how is your dad, but then asks if he will be back and Weiyu says he doesnt know. Weiyu tells him to leave if he has nothing more to say, and Menghao apologizes and says he cant forget him and stuff and so they both are on the verge of crying and Weiyu pulls him in and they starts making out and taking eachothers clothes off. Menghaos uncle comes in and says stuff that triggers Weiyu so they have sex in the bathroom whilst he is there and Menghao turns the shower on to distract the uncle, and as he leaves Weiyu gets rougher. They then spend several days in Weiyus place having sex. And Weiyu not talking about his travel that is tomorrow as if it doesnt matter. They then have sex in Weiyus mothers fav room, and he says its fine to make the house dirt cause a cleaner will come clean later and nothing will be left. Then the next day, Weiyu left after only leaving a note, barely even packing anything, as if to say that he had nothing special left there anyway. And later Menghao gets hospitalized by his father after he found out he is gay. Just heartbreaking. Even more heartbreaking then before.
A Trace of the Wonder
@95 FIN SUPERRRRT cool Action BL! Also super sad, and a slow burn as the BL part hasnt even appeared, but its VERY well written so who cares! 37 = KYUUUAAUAUAUAAAAAAHAHHAHA 41 = ICONIC 45+46 = Hyeons past is revealed and hes even more of an ICON then before, wow. the audacity of these fuckers to do this to a child who hasnt done shit. His mom did. SLAY HYEON, SLLAAAYYYYYYYYYY 48 = give yiseon a break you clowns 49 to 52 = YYAAASSS!!!! KILLL HIMMM! well sadlt he didnt die but YYAYAYAYAYYASSSS LEGGEENNDNDND 55 = yeSSSS, JOOHYEOK OUR CYTIE SIDE CHARA DID THATTT!! SLAYYY 59 = Yiseon cant catch w break for even 1 day 63 = child. Never drink anything a psychopath gives you. Gg, rip 75+76 = AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!! ALRIGHTTTT, SLAAYYYY ZADDDDDYYYYYYYYYYY! 88 = period fy uke, messed up to use him for that and then get and at him for doing the same
Assorted Wildness
@special 5, COMPLETED Solid 8.5 or 9/10! Definitely a fun reread option aswell VERY good, but also every single sibling SUCKED ASS! Mongmongs sister SUCKS, Jeha's prosecutor brother SUCKS, like wtf! Its been a while, to finds a story where every side chara that is supposed to be likable is scum jn my eyes. Would love if the both dissapeared from the earth.
Private Scandal