Hitorijime My Hero
Dine With a Vampire
@79 FINISHED 9.5/10! SOOOOO GOOODDD!! CUTE, EMOTIONAL, UNIQUE, SAD, HOT, IT HAS IT ALL! AND VAMPIRES YAY! My review after chapter 9 - So I've been a fan of any story with vampires since I was a kid because the first anime I watched was Vampire Knight lmao, but sadly almost every BL vampire story I found either got dropped by the author, dropped by the translators, or just wasn't that good, and it's honestly not a very common trope, so I wasn't expecting too much from this story but wow. Only 9 chapters in and I already KNOW this is AMAZING. (Spoilers ahead) The fact that both the uke and seme know how to give and take is SO PLEASING. Instead of just abducting the uke for his blood he just waits for the uke to ask him something and he offers a VERY fair price for his blood, and he doesn't just take it he waits till AFTER he helps the uke first which is SO rare. Then the uke gives him what he wants (blood), the seme is incredibly nice in bed aswell, nothing is being forced onto him which is very common in BL's but ESPECIALLY common in supernatural stories (I don't mind forceful stuff usually but supernatural stories are already more sparse so I wish it was less common in those tropes). ( ̄∇ ̄") And they also did not drag out the drama with the asshole ''bf'' of the uke and just ended it real quick!! this is SO SATISFYING. Both of them have some issues in their lives, both of them communicate well, don't just take but also give back, nothings forced on the other, but it's still interesting at the same type? 10/10 for the author. ヾ(☆▽☆) The only other vampire BL that I like that hasn't randomly stopped being uploaded is Bottomless Swap though that's a more dramatic one (would also recommend for anyone who likes vampires)
Torokeru Chouai Celluloid
Review after CH. 2 + 5* rating - I LOVE THISSS! Finally more middle east stories which as a middle eastern I love, and with both characters being SO adorable! I hope the drama about the Prince Sana being engaged won't be too painful ┗( T﹏T )┛ Also I'm glad Togo finally talked with the people at work, but its VERY unrealistic that the shitty boss felt bad about SCREAMING at Togo 2x in a row (which was so unnecessary especially if you decide to not believe an apology), but in Ch. 1 he said "He has no human heart. No wonder his bride slept with someone else." Umm... Lowest scum you can be, disgusting. Everyone else except the newbie also suck for loudly talking shit about him but the Boss is straight up unforgivable. Basically, TOGO X SANA FOR LIFEEEEE ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ ️️️️ Review after completed story Ch.5 - Godly. Wow. Precious. Cute. Adorable. *sad noises cause it ended*┗( T﹏T )┛
A Villain Is A Good Match For A Tyrant
@104 fin 9.5/10! -0.5 cause of the weird ending with the typing of a new story, as that wasnt explained as to how it works, and in the later extra chapters suddenly everyone uses these magic email boxes unexplained. But its SO cute and slays so I only take a little off CH 101 = OMG THEY HAD A BABY! KARAYAN! SUPER CUTE CHAPTER THAT MADE BE BAWL AND LAUGH. shows how all couples kids turned out aswell, iconic. LOVE IT CH 2 = ICONIC KWEEN SHIT. DESTROY THEM FL, NO FUCKS GIVEN. COMEDY TO THE MAX CH 5 = ICONIC TRUTH SERUM POWER CH 9 + 10 + 11 = FL and ML having the BEST performance of a life time with her being a fake villainess. Impeccable chapter, to die for. Hilarious, iconic, ridiculous, 100/10 read again. CH 21 = WEIRD AF 2ND MALE LEAD RICHARD APPEARS LMAO, PSYCHO CREEP CH 31 + 32 = ICONIC FL PERFORMANCE. DRAPING FABRIC AROUND HER AND GOING TO GET HER MAN, AND PLANNING MURDER WITH HIM LMAO! She went from fake villainess to genuinely mad HAHA. 0 FUCCS GIVEN. 100/10 READ AGAIN CH 50 = FL appearing on a damn PEGASUS and holding the imperial Spector wand. Iconic, get that power. CH 53 + 54 = FL destroying the evil hoe and the creepy magician Richard being iconic CH 55 = FL x RICHARD THE MAGE, HAVING A BEAUTIFUL PERFORMANCE OF A VILLAINESS LMAO CH 61 + 62 + 63 = ML TURNED INTO A MONSTER CAUSE OF SOME PIECE OF SHIT SCIENTIST EXEPRIMENTING ON HIM, BUT THE FL SAVED HIM. EMOTIONAL AND ICONIC COUPLE CH 70 = FL and ML BAKING APPLE PIE, COUPLE CUTENESS CH 73 = the dragon Girgantia become a HOTTIE HUMAN HAHAHA CH 78 + 79 = the FL did it, she saved daddy ML with her powers, and we FINALLy get back story on her powers! Also more hottie girgantia CH 87 + 88 = MORE INFO ABOUT THE WORLDS BACK STORY + TaNIA LEAVES AND IGNORES GIRGANTIA + ALED THE ELF BEING ICONIC AND TALKING TOO MUCH + FINALLY more info on why the ML doesnt want a kid CH 90 = WOOOHHHH, GIRGANTIA X TANIA FOREVER. and the FL ready for battle CH 92 t/m 95 = THE FINAL BATTLE. SO MUCH EMOTIONS SNIFF. the ending in ch 94 is kinda lame but ch 93 is so emotional, and 95 is cherry on top to finish CH 96 = BABIES OF TANIA AND GIRGANTIA OMG YASSS. Also Kane being a psycho obsessed boi to his Saintess bae like always CH 98 = the red haired cecile helped current cecile out! Nice detail CH 99 + 100 = IRENE X RICHARD, INVOLVING A COOKIE HAHA. LOVE IT
Angel Buddy
@82 FINISHED BAWLING MY EYES OUTTT!!! ITS SO GOOODDDD, AND SO SADDD AND SO CUTEEE UGHHHH!!! 10000/10 RATING, STEP ON ME AUTHOR AND RIP ME TO SHREDS !
Escape, Ray
@79 REAL GOODDDD Espers = people with esp powers Esps = powers the Espers have, that are around their body and they can learn to control. Different ones exist, like teleportation, telekinesis, emotions etc. Surge = when an Esper loses control and kinda goes berserk, can cause natural disasters if their power is very strong Kile/Killian = ML brown hair, telekinesis power inherited Lou/Lucy/Lucien = ML blonde esper seme, emotion? Power Ray = Kyle's twin ex-esper brother Lily = Lou's squad, brown hair girl, protection shield esp Flinn Asher = Bureau Esper, teleportation Alec = Lou's squad, black hair girl, absorbing power that can absorb other Esp powers and release them again Rhys = Lou's squad, brown hair boi, brainwash esp Dylan = Lou's squad, blue hair HOTTIE human, potential thug lmao Edith = Criminal Boss, Rays former boss, Esper who makes contracts AND can steal other people's Esp powers if contract broken Felix = HOT bureau Esper and Flinns friend, mindcontrol Aiden = works for Edith Atropos = can kill, take away or give people Esps Dalia = Strong esper that can set traps, special forces Gale Anderson = Chief at Burea Spencer Hill = Gale's secretary Milo = Lou squad, teleporting esper = 54, 63 to 65, 70 to 76, 79 to = 16 + 17, 51 + 52, 57 = 41, 46, 56, 59, 64, 78, 79 79 to = Kile visits Lou and Lou IMMEDIATELY apologizes, which really angers Kile! He screams that he should stop apologizing, as that is NOT what Like wants, he just wants Lou to stop putting himself in danger the entire time, and how seeing Lou almost die infront of him after saving Kile was insanely painful. However this DUMBASS Lou again interprets this as him purposefully hurting Kile and how much of a piece of shit he is, when that is exactly what Kile is trying to stop him from thinking bruh. 76 to 78 = Lou has already woken up, his surgery went well and he is in rehab at the hospital. However, Kile hasn't contactee or visited him yet, not even once. Ray tries to ask why, but Kile says he just feels scared, cause every time Lou was with him he ended up somehow hurt. Ray then asks if Kile wants some time alone as he is starting to tear up, and he says yes. Then Lou calls Kile in his phone! He begs Kile to come visit him even if its just once, so he can apologize, and that he misses him so much. But Kile says he isn't ready and hangs up. Flinn and Ray meet and Flinn almost confesses his feelings, but Ray interrupts and says he is planning to leave all on his own without Kile or anyone and be free. So Flinn says that's great.. 71 to 75 = Edith tries to escape with Lou after he got shot, and Kile manages to barely jump in. They then end up at a house, and Edith seems to be somewhere else in the house. A girl finds Lou and Kile and says that she is friend with Ray, and that when Ray woke up after the accident he tried to escape Edith even though he had no powers, and Edith then got this girl to come put him to sleep. She got close to him in that short time they talked, and she promised Ray to allow him to wake up ONCE without Edith knowing. And so she guides Lou and Kile to Rays room. Edith ends up finding them and tries to ATTACK KILE, Lou then protects him and gets stabbed instead. Edith then calls Ray a monster and that he is a tool, a tool that can only be controlled by Edith his Esp, and how he needs Kile to die next to him. He gets ready to try and attack Kile again, and suddenly a heavy force hits him. Its Kile who is about to surge, as he says he is ready to KILL Edith. He tries to use all his power to kill Edith, but Kile's Core ends up starting to break, which means his power can't be controlled anymore and is about to kill him if he doest get it under control. Then last minute, Atropos appears and saves Kile by taking his Esp away! She then manages to take EDITHS Esp away HAHA! Ray and Kile are saved. HOWEVER, Lou is very cold and bleeding out, and nobody can heal in the current room, and Atropos can't teleport him to a hospital as everyone would recognize her. So all they can do is wait and hope Lou holds on long enough. Its now been a while, Ray has woken up and is getting rehab and living life with Kile. 69 + 70 = Kile saves Lou from some BASTARD guard who was about to beat Kile up, and beats him up. Then shoots blank shots so that Lily and Flinn know their location. But then EDITH COMES, and sees Kile is there, so immediately tries to KILL LOU. Luckily Lily finds them on time and shields Lou and Kile, and Flinn tries to fight Edith and kill him but is clearly struggling with Lily. Edith then tells Kile that he can have Ray back ALIVE, if he just follows him. Kile is really thinking about it even though he KNOWS that Edith is not to be trusted, but he misses Ray. Then BOOM, Lou manages to shoot Edith in his stomachs. 66 to 68 = The squad plans to find Lou and save him, and so Kile is told to go back to a safehouse and will be protected by Flinn and Felix who will help calm him down during potential Surges with his mind control power! Lou manages to escape the warehouse he is in, and stays outside for long enough for the squad to locate his location In the mean time we find out that Chief Anderson made a deal with Edith that he would get Ray, and Edith explains that if Kile dies whilst next to Ray, Rays esp will ho back to Ray as HE IS STILL ALIVE! Edith has been keeping him in his bed, and using another Esper who works for him to put him to sleep so he won't wake up! 61 to 65 = THE PLAN STARTS! Lily and Kile stay in the car and watch guard, whilst Alec, Lou and Milo a teleportation Esp user go inside Edith's building at night. Kile is worried for Lou as he is not a fighting Esp, but Lily says its fine as he is a really accurate gun shooter, and knows martial arts. Lou ends up really being a great hitman! However, Aiden ends up being there and attacks Lou, who then barely gets saved by Alec. Aiden is human however so Alec can't bounce his powers back to him and is holding him down, so the original plan for Alec to go disable the Esp trap is failed, and Lou and Milo go in to try it themselves! Lou sets the trap off, which is only for 1 person and is a ring that slowly closes in on Lou alone, but he ignores it ans focuses on getting Ray out first... BUT ITS NOT RAY! ITS A REALISTIC DOLL! Edith then appears and STABS Milo. Milo manages to escape and bring Kile to them to try and help Lou, but Edith manages to catch Lou and abduct him, his plan being that he will use Lou to get Kile later. And so Lou and Edith dissapears, after apologizing to Kile for not finding the real Ray... PAIN Flinn and Kile then burn the fake body of Ray 60 = Flinn goes to the Atropos and she agrees that she won't tell the bureau all the shit he is doing, IF he allows her to meet Kile. Atropos tells him the Esper who they saw at Edith's place, who was with Spencer, is called Dalia and has trap abilities. 53 to 59 = Kile officially joins Lou's team and hears about all their plans to find Rays body. It took a while to convince Lou to allow Kile to help, but he finally did, eveb though he doesnt want to lose Kile. In the mean time, Edith got an Esper sent by Gale from the bureau to but a huge trap around his building, and anyone who gets in the building and does not have a small piece of his Esp power, will set off the trap. And only REALLY strong Esps can escape. However Lou and his squad, already expect it to be a trap so they want to not let Kile go there. In the mean time Dylan also gets his own workers to come body guard Kile LMAO RHYS ANS KILE MEET EACHOTHER AND BECOME BFFS HAHAH! CUTE! Flinn also joins the convo but is very skeptical about this all and almost chokes Rhys out for trying to use his brainwash on Flinn, and so Flinn leaves. Kile follows him and says it will al be fine but Flinn says NOBODY can be sure of that! They have a VERY emotional convoy, and afterwards Kile goes back to the squad and is exhausted emotionally. We also learn about Lou's past and how he got abused and used by his uncle forcing him to use his Esp for his work. 50 to 52 = Flinn and Felix have to work late night so wont be home all day, so they ask Lou to take care of Kile. Kile is oit buying food and then EDITH appears! Kile immediately recognizes him,and is overwhelmed by his aura, and cant even move from fear. Edith then kisses him for a while, and then whispers that he wants to hear his voice and that he has Rays body. Kile then pushes him off and asks what he means, and Edith says the pictures he sent say it all. He then tells Kile that if he gives him what he wants ( which is a contract), he will give him Ray. Kile almost gives in, but Lou arrives and tries push Edith away. Edith then almost kills Lou, but Lou barely gets away and Kile then uses him powers to hurt Edith. Sadly it was only a projection of Edith, so he didnt get very hurt. Edith then escapes, but Kile is about to surge! Lou tries to get close to Kile to calm him down, but Kile tells him to back off. He then asks Lou if he knew that Edith had Rays body, and Lou says yes. Kile gets mad and asks why TF he did not tell Kile, but Lou starts breaking down crying and asks HOW he could tell Kile, and how Kile and his Esp would be able to handle that anger! How Ray was like family to Lou, and how much it hurt him, and its not easy to know. Kile finally realizes that Lou has also been hurting and hugs him, and asks Lou if he still resents him and sees him as a Ray replacement. Lou says no, and CONFESSES! THEY KISS AND THEN GO HOME TOGETHER SNIFFF!!!!! CUTEEE 45 to 47 = Lou thought he had found an Esper who could neutralize Rays powers, however it was all a TRAP, for Edith to figure out their location! Edith's people start chasing Lou, aawell as Flinn and Ray who were at home and barely escaped! Lou immediately tells Rhys to tell him where Kile is, and then goes up to Kile on the street, purposefully making Edith's people think that Kile is Ray and is with Lou! LOU THEN GRABS KILE'S HAND, AND STARTS RUNNING AT THE SPEED OF LIGHT WHILST BEING CHASED BY AIDEN LIKE A PSYCHO LMAO!! POOR KILE HAS NO IDEA WHO ANY OF THEM ARE! He DID tell Kile it had to do with Ray though! In the end Kile does get slashed a bit by Aiden, and Lily also gets a little hurt, but they get away. Lou then told Ray to NOT come to the hospital, but he ends upcoming and seeing Kile in a bed asleep, and gets mad at Lou for using his own twin brother as bait! Rhys also brainwashed Kile so he wont remember any of this unless someone mentions it, but Ray is still MAD. Ray then says that if he knew Kile wouldve been put in danger, he wouldnt have done all this to begin with and just give up. Then Edith appears behind Ray and says "If giving up means coming back to me, that is the right decision Ray" Flinn manages to save Ray and teleport him away, but he couldnt control his Esp well so all 4 of them end up at some cliff in the woods. Lou is holding Edith back, but Edith then uses anotherone of his Esp powers and STABS LOU WITH WEIRD TENTACLES! Lou falls to the ground, bleeding heavily. Ray now thinks that this is all his fault, and that even though this was all his own mistake, he is the one who came out with not even 1 scratch, whilst Lou his family is bleeding and dying, and Kile is in the hospital... And so he tells Edith that he will nevee be able to get what he wants (Rays Esp), and jumps off the cliff into the water. What Ray doesnt take into account is that he also was in harm, maybe not physical, but sexual and all the trauma. Poor Ray... Sadly Flinn wasnt able to save him on time either, and Ray drowned. Flinn then managed to barely bring Lou to the hospital on time to survive. We go back to current time and Felux tells Kile to get rid of his Esp, And Kile says NO, as he sees it as a type of inheritance left by his brother, sniff. Flinn also tells Kile that Edith knows about him, and Kile then mentions the pictured they received at Lou's House. So Flinn and Kile now know that Edith has aleeady been doing styff 36 to 44 = Flinn explains that the bureau went after Ray as he accidentally KILLED one of Flinns team members, and Dave the guy who died was a VERY strong Esper aswell. So the Bureau did NOT want revenge for Dave's death, but wanted to find a way to get Ray and use him as a puppet for his powers. Flinn actually plans to help Ray, as he is the one who met Ray when he was still young and tried to join the bureau, but didnt get accepted. He then decided to help Ray escape Edith who is a criminal boss who makes Espers like Ray do shady shit for him. Ray says he will accept Flinns help, BUT he need to convince someone for him, which is LOU! Lou says NO, but Ray says he will do it anyway. The plan Flinn made is to DESTROY Rays Esp powers and turn him human, Lou tells Ray he shouldnt have to do that, and that its ridiculous how he is doing all this just to be able to live with his Twin brother Kile who "doesnt even care where you live or what you do", but Ray says he has to do it. Ray leaves to meet Edith whilst Lou and Flinn talk, and we can see that Ray and Edith have sex. Then Flinn asks what Edith's power is, and he says he uses his Esp to make contracts with people, and if they break the contract, Edith is able to take over that persons Esp power! However it turns out that Ray did NOT make a contract with Edith via Edith's Esp power, but a paper contract that was signed in front of Lou aswell, so he sensed that the powers were not used. And the deal was Ray essentially selling his entire body to him, including sex. But Ray sees Edith murder someone in front of him and Edith mentions how Ray killed the bureau guy Dave a month ago, and how he is now meeting with a bureau agent behind his back. Showing that he has been tailing Ray. He then tells Ray that he shouldn't take their contract lightly, and Ray says it was just a paper one. But then, he somehow manages to block one of Rays attacks which should not be possible as he does NOT have a defensive esp, and Edith then put his Esp contract mark which is a SPIDER on Rays leg, and Ray cries And doesn't understand how this happened. Turns out the first time they met just 1 on 1 in Edith's room, Edith said Ray has to give him his everything, body and everything, and Ray accepted, and Edith had secretly used his Esp right then and there and the paper was just for show. He then tells Ray that he knows about Kile and could kill him at any moment. Edith tells Ray to bring him the Atropos who is a person that can destroy, create or remove Esps or works for the bureau. Flinn and Lou decide to help Ray escape Edith for now, and Ray asks Lou to help get Kile into a safe location secretly. And so Rhys uses his mind control power on Kile's mom to make her kick him out and move out to a new location. Ray and Kile them met up once, before they started the plan to escape Edith. Lou was still pissed about Ray sacrificing so much stuff just to be able to have an ordinary life with his brother Kile, who unlike Ray was NOT abused by his parents (they were separated via adoption), and Ray said that the memories he had with Kile from the orphanage are to this day his best memories in his life... IM GONNA DIE FROM TEARS! Ray says that Edith can only take someone's Esp by physically taking it from them, so asking as he doesn't find Ray, his powers are safe. And so, Lou, Ray and Flinn all go together to a secret apartment from Flinn and spend over 1 month there, trying to find an Esper with powers to neutralize other Esp powers to help break the contract. Flinn is worries about Ray, cause every time Lou goes outside to search for Esperrs to help remove the contract, Ray looks worried or sad or something. Ray doesn't wanna tell him, but then asks if Flinn can have sex with him. He says he just want to experience what it is like to have sex with someone who gives you love for once, and how he thinks Flinn could do that. Its cause he had sex with Edith and has trauma from those times, sniff. And so they have sex 30 to 35 = Kile gets picked up by Flinn and he beings him to Felix's house! Felix is Flinns VERY HOT best friend who also works at the bureau with him and has mind control powers and also knows about all the drama about Ray. He is NOT a fan of Kile being here as it can cause trouble for Flinn if the bureau finds out, but he let's him stay. He does use his mind control on Kile as he almost had a surge at the start, cause he got mad at Felix. Felix also is VERY shocked that Kile is even ALIVE! Apparently, an adult who inherits an Esp that is as strong and Ray's power was, in almost ALL cases will DIE. This is because there are only a few ways for your body to deal with such strong power, and most involve manifesting at a YOUNG age and slowly getting used to it. But when an adult inherits the powers it is all at once, and usually killd them. So Felix tells Kile he shouldve never left Lou, as he is LITERALLY the only reason he is still standing here alive. Later on, Felix apologizes to Kile for being harsh, and that hedoesnt hate him but more so Ray. Then Kile asks Flinn what happened with Ray and Flinn says he was being chased by both the bureau AND Edith who was Rays former boss. The bureau was after Ray as he was an illegal esper, and Edith as he wanted Ray back. 18 to 29 = Edith the psycho who has Rays dead body, sent 2 pics to their house hinting at Rays bodies whereabouts, but they refuse to tell Kile about what the pictures mean and how they have been looking for Rays body and that Edith some demon psycho has it. And so Lily and Lou leave, and Kile secretly calls Flinn to get some answers! However he did not check the house well and didn't realize that Alec stayed at the house, so she is listening in. Turns out that the story about there being a 90% chance to inherit your twins powers was a LIE, and that Lou had been following Kile for 1 entire YEAR and was waiting for the day his Esper powers were coming, which he can sense in people when the time is close. For Kile it was 8hrs after he met Lou that his powers started, so it adds up. He did get his powers from his dead brother Ray, it just doesn't seem to be a 90% chance Also, this explains why the Bureau that hunts dangerous Espers where Flinn worked never went after Kile the moment Ray died, cause the 90% inheritance thing is a lie. Flinn can't speak more though as he is at the bureau and doesn't want them to know he is in contact with Kile so they hang up. And Alec messages Lou and says they have been in contact. Alec however did not hear what they were talking about on the phone so there isn't much they can do. Lou is however sure that Kile can't just leave as he still has no idea how to stabilize his own powers and is dependant on Lou, which is an advantage. Lou starts thinking about the things he wish he had done, like tap Kile his phone, and make sure he only sees, hears and learns the things HE shows him. He then leaves early and goes to meet Kile. Kile starts crying and apologizes, and Lou says he should stop acting and pushes him down and says he knows he talked to Flinn, and then starts messing with Kile's powers just like he had done with Flinn. He pushed the powers just enough to NOT cause Kile to surge. He then takes Kile into a car and tells Kile he will help stabilize his Esp whenever he wants, IF he asks for it himself. Kile holds back and says no and that he knows he can do it himself, as that is what Flinn said. So Lou says that's fine, I can wait, and so Kile faints again and they arrive at the secret location in a basement and put Kile down. A barrier has been put around the building swell to prevent Kile from escaping if he wakes up. Lily and Lou also talk and Lou says he will make sure to "tame" Kile before they find Rays body. Kile wakes up and throws stuff at Lou and tells him he won't need his help. Lou still won't tell him anything about Ray so Kile starts thinking about how happy he felt during their date, and his Esp goes WAY out of control which shocks and worries Lou. So Lou BEGS Kile to let him help him, and so Kile accepts since Lou looks worried. Lou kisses him and calm Kile down and then stops before he fully helps him as he still needs Kile to be reliant on him. But Lou didn't wanna stop himself even. The next day Kile wakes up and feels embaressed, but also feels like he always craves Lou's touch when he is about to surge and that he is getting reliant so tries to escape. Lou appears and stops him before he tries to open the door because there is a protection barrier on it that would HURT Kile! He then gives Kile his fav cake and calms him down a bit We then get a small flashback of Lou and Flinn talking and Flinn saying the bureau has put out a shoot-to-kill order on Kile! They think he is Ray. So he asks Lou to keep Kile safe at the secret location. Kile tries to escape but can't and then decides to give in and makes out with Lou, who treats him like a lover. Lou is shocked however cause it truly feels like Kile is in love with Lou's Esp power and addicted to it, which even for Lou is NOT what he wanted. Kile at the same time is thinking of turning his back on Lou once he leaves, as he is still not sure if these people also are out to protect Ray or not. Dylan calls Lou and says they got a 3rd picture for a clue for Rays whereabouts from Edith! Kile wakes up whilst everyone except Lily is away, and he manages to break the barrier at the door now that his powers are stable again. Lily LETS HIM LEAVE because she is pissed about Lou not keeping business and private matters separate and acting very different when it comes to Kile. So Kile escapes but Lou sees him on the street and stops him, Kile then hits Lou and makes him bleed and Lou stops him again. Kile tells him that its clear Lou doesn't even like him back so WHY is he so nice to him at times, yet refuses to tell him what happened to Ray! Lou says if he knew what happened he would hate him, so Kile says be can't either tell him or let him go. And so, Lou let's go of Kile's hand... Kile then goes to a nearby cafe and uses their phone to call Flinn 12 to 17 = Alec, Lily and Lou all leave the house so after they make out a bit, Kile starts looking for ANY info on Flinn and Ray, as he still believes Ray might be alive. Then Flinn starts throwing pebbles on the windows to get Kile's attention. He then apologizes and gives him his phone number to meet and talk about Ray someday, and says he can't teleport him away right now, cause last time Lou messed up Flinns powers so he is still recovering them. Flinn then leaves, BUT Rhys who is Lou's friend and came to surprise Lou with cake, but saw Flinn talking to Kile and calls Lou and tells him about it, and that he wasn't able to hear what they were talking about BUT that Kile received Flinns phone number. Lou is pissed off lmao HOWEVER Kile ends up BURNING Flinns phone number, because he remembers Lou telling him to not open the door for anyone! However he immediately regrets it LMAO, but also thinks its smart cause now he THINKS there is no evidence of him meeting Flinn, which is wrong cause Rhys took a PICTURE of Flinn in the yard talking to Kile and sent it to Lou lmao. Lou then calls Kile and invited him to a dinner in a privaty room, which makes Kile happy as he says it feels like a date. Then Lou has to RUIN IT and shows Kile the pictures and asks what Flinn said. Kile gets mad and wants to leave and cries, so Lou starts feeling bad and hugs him and says sorry but that he wants to know what happened. So Kile is honest and says everything and that he burned the phone number which makes Lou REALLY happy as he is shocked by his honesty and actions. HOWEVER Kile is kind of lying as he told Lou he wants to hear about Ray from him and not Flinn, but he actually memorized Flinns number and WILL try to calm him. when they get out the restaurant, Lou asks Kile why he was so excited for this, and Kile shyly asks its of course cause he was excited to eat with someone he likes! Lou seems to be a lightweight and drunk and asks Kile what he wants him to do, as he is in a GREAT mood, so Kile asks to go to Lou's room which he has never been in. So they go home and into Lou's room and starts MAKING OUT And BABANGGG (tho it is NOT shown) 9 to 11 = Flinn abducts Kile, then apologizes afterwards when he realizes it isn't some random Esper impersonating Ray but his twin brother. Kile almost has a surge happen and tells Flinn to bring him to Kile so he can calm down, and Flinn is confused and asks why he doesn't know how to stabilize his own powers yet. Lou then finds them and asks Alec to take Kile, and Lou talks to Flinn and says Flinn killer Ray so he shouldn't give AF about what Lou does with Kile. He didn't ACTUALLY kill Ray tho, it seems to have been kind of an accident with drowning idk. Flinn says he that Lou already had control over Rays life and drove him to the edge so he should leave Kile alone, and Lou chokes him and leaves. A woman names Edith is also secretly spying on all of this and has Rays DEAD BODY IN HER OFFICE WTF?! In the mean team Kile is starting to doubt Lou's intentions and unsure if he can trust him 7 + 8 = Kile starts practicing his new powers with Lily, Alec andLou, and Lou ends up helping. BUT Kile notices Lou was the one moving the glass by USING Kile's powers, cause that is also a way he can use his powers apparently. In the end Ky Kile does manage to do it by himself tho! Kile and Lou go to Kile his house to get his clothes and go back and practice his power more. Kile does a weird thing with his hand to be able to concentrate more LMAO, and then Lou and him KISSSSSS, and Kile asks Lou what he thinks of him and Lou gives a wishywashy answer about not doing this if he hated him, but that's enough for this dumbass Kile 4 to 6 = Kile's powers start manifesting via a fever, which sadly means Ray is indeed dead. For some reason Lou's touch calms him down. Lou then kisses him, whilst we see a flashback of Lou being called "Lucy" by Ray, so it seems he liked Ray. Kile just falls asleep after the kiss and doesn't remember it LMAO! Turns out Lou is an Esper who can control emotions and feel them and push another Espers powers out or back in, via touching. Similar to the other Esper BL I read. You need physical touch like hand holding for it. Lou pisses Kile off again the next day cause he is being a RUDE BITCH, and so Kile goes to his room as his powers are going insane again from anger. Lou goes check upon him and help his powers calm down, and then kisses him and mentions the kiss from yesterday which Kile still doesn't remember but gets mad about it. Then Lou keeps teasing him about whether or not Kile TRULY hates kissing him, and Kile gives in and says it isn't that bad and kisses more 2 = Apparently, if you are born as identitical twins, and only 1 of you becomes an esper, and then the esper dies BEFORE the other twin, the other twin inherits their powers. So If Ray truly is dead like Lou is saying, Kile should turn into an Esper!
Love Tractor
@80, FINISHED! PERFECTION ITSELFFF!!! 9.5/10!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTEEEEEEEE, AAHHHHH!!!!! THE ART, THE STORY, THE CHARAS, AAHHHH LOVE IT!!!! Tho I hope Insuh BURNS ALIVE for using Yoon like a tool during college and stringinghim along for 8 years, but AHHHHH THE REST IS CUTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! Yoon = ML producer Yechan = ML farmer doggie = Dongshik SCUM CUNT EX/ACTOR = Insuh Yoon's manager = Youngdae Chef, Yechans client = Chef Yoorim = Yool's lil sis BAE = 33, 35, 42 + 43, 48 + 49, 56!!!, 69, 79!!!!! ROMANCE = 36 to 38!!! 40, 45!!!49, 50 + 51!!!!, 52 + 53!!!! 58, 63 + 64, 66 + 67, 69!!!, 77 + 78!!!, BABANG = 64!! 36 to 38 = YECHAN CONFESSESS, LMAOAOASIBSKN!!! AAAHHHH! AND KISSES YOOL IN THE CAR BACK ON THE CHEEK! 41= YECHAN PREPS A HORROR MOVIE FOR YOOL TO GET SCARED, AND IT ENDS UP ALLOWING HIM TO SLEEPOVER IN YOOL BED AAAHHH 42 + 43 = YOOL FINDS HIS OLD PIANO HIS MOM "GOT RID" OF CUS OF HIS DAD, BUR APPARENTLY ITS BEEN WOTH HIS GRANDPA AT THE FARM YAY! HE PLAYS FOR YECHAN AND GETS NERVOUS FIEST BUY YECHAN HELPS HIM!!! AAHHHH MARRY EACHOTHERRRRRRR 50 + 51 = IN TEARSSS!!! YECHAN AND YOOL AT A WATERFALL BEING CUTE, AND THEN YECHAN MAKING A WISH SINCE YOOL IS LEAVING BACK TO SEOUL IN A WEEK, SNIFFFF 52 + 53 = YOOL MAKES A SONG AS HIS ALIAS HERTZ ABOUT LOVE, WITHOIT YECHAN KNOWING!! AND HE THEN KINDA CONFESSES TO YECHAN OMFGGGAGAUVAIB!! AND YHEN LEAVES FOR SEOUL IM DYIN HERE!!!! 55 to 57 = YECHAN IS NOW A BUSINESS OWNER IN SEOUL WITH HIS OWN NEARBY FARM AND COMES SURPRISE YOOL! AND NOW MOVES IN BY FORCE HAHAHA!! 60 to 62 = Yechan and Insuh go eat together so Insuh can explain he has a ceush on Yoon's MANAGER YOUNGDAE! Then they meet the Chef who Yechan sells his peaches too and he invites them to his restaurant to eat so they do. Then he asks Yechan to wait AND CONFESSES!! Yechan says he lieks someone else, but then the Chef asks if they are dating...And Yechan says he is unsure sniff. So the chef says he moght have a chance then but wont be pushy. But Yechan is now hurt, and asks Yoon what they are after telling him what happened UGHH!! 63 to 65 = THEY OFFICIALLY SSTART DATTIINGGH!!! WOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGGGHGHHHAHHAHA!!! AND THEY MAKE OUT AND WANK OFF YAY! AND THEN YOOL SAYS HE WAS READY TO DATE YECHAN 1 YEAR AGO, BUT YECHAN DIDNT TELL HIM HE WAS IN SEOUL AS HE WANTED TO GROW HIS BUSINESS SECRETLY SNIFF. The next day Yechan and Yool flort RIGHT INFRONT OF YOUNGDAE WITHOUT YECHAN KNOWING HE WAS THERE LMAO! Then yechan meets the chef during delivery and they end it on a good note andthe chef accepts the rejection, sniff, hope he finds someone cause the chef is HOT! 73 to 76 = like always, authors love to ruin my life, so Yechan got into a truck accident and is in the hospital, and wakes up just as Yool had to leace the country for work sigh. At least Yechan didnt lose his memory but does have PTSD and cant speak and misses Yool! 77 to = Yool comes back after many weeks and even comes early and surprises him with flowers! Then later on PROPOSES to Yechan and says he wants to get married! Yechan says yes but later says he is unsure as it would mean moving out of Korea, and so Yool accepts it and says he understand why he wouldnt want that, and that he does wish for them to live together FOREVER, in the house they met eachother in. The farm house of Yools grandpa! And so 2 years pass and they are living together like a married couple, and Yools mom and sister both come visit, and its the first time the mom gets to meet Yechan! They then go meet up with Yool who was planting rice in a farming outfit LMAOOOO! Yechan looks so proud AHH SO CUTE! Yools mom is really liking Yechan and also finds out that all the land they own is Yechans families land, who are huge in the village! Yechan is still worried that Yools mom might not like him, but Yools mom thanks him at the end for teaching Yool so much andcaring for her son, and calls him her 2nd son! UGHH FUCK YESSSS 79 = A SUPER CUTE AND FUN CHAPTER ABOUT YOOL GETTING FILMED FOR A REALITY SHOW ABOUT HIS HOME LIFE, AND CUTE STUFF BETWEEN YOOL AND YECHAN BEING SHOWN AAHHH! tho ofcourse nobody can know they are dating, EVEN THO THEY ARE SO OBVIOUS ABOUT IT LMAO! GOD I LOVE ITTTTTT
Unromantic
@side.10, FINISHED 9.5/10! SOOOOOO GOOODDDD!AN OMEGA WHO LOOKS MACHO, IS A CHAEBOL RICH GUY + AN EX BOXER?! SOOO GOOODDD. SO CUTE, SO PERFECT AAHHHHH!! AND NO RAPE OR ASSAULT, AND A CUTE BEBI. ugh. Amazing. 23 = , that's all. 25 to 27 = 40 + 41 = FAMILYYYYY 51 = !!!! 53=
Honto Yajuu