i personally think it's pretty weak in terms of storytelling. the characters are not bad, yet they are also not that interesting enough for me to be invested in. the premise is particularly generic, and in terms of execution, there wasn't anything particularly special. it was just missing something crucial for a totally enjoyable BL, in my opinion. while the worldbuilding is interesting, it could use more work and development. it feels pretty wasted on the plot. furthermore, the couples are just not that,,, gripping?
would probably rate it 2.5/5; however, the art is really gorgeous. great character design as well. pretty hot smut scenes!
tldr; read for the porn, and not the plot, i suppose.
Heaven & Hell Roman Company