The pacing was kinda bad. It just didn't give the reader enough time to connect with the characters. I didn't get any emotional impact from the story either. As for the characters themselves, I like them but I don't think they were fleshed out enough and that some of their personality was changed a bit throughout. I specifically mean for the lawyer. He was more unhinged in the beginning and I find that more interesting. Also one other criticism.... Sometimes the sex felt unnecessary or just would happen in the weirdest times. For example near the end when they were having a serious meeting he pulled Caesar to the side.
Overall it was alright. I only read it cus it was popular so I might not read the extras
My favourite part was when Lee Won almost stabbed Cesar with a fountain pen in the earlier chapters. He was so cool lol
6/10
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